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    Edgar Allan Poe's "Unparalleled Adventures of one Hans Pfaall" illustrations

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    • akerman
      akerman last edited by

      Hi!

      I'd like to put some effort into moving from game art, where I've been for the last decade, into book illustrations.
      I would really love some input on this small project of mine:

      Edgar Allan Poe wrote a short story called "Unparalleled Adventures of one Hans Pfaall", which I've decided to do a few (three, to be precise) illustrations for. This is an experiment I want to do with watercolors and try to find some sort of a attractive look for.

      The first illustration is this:

      hanspfaall1_1k.jpg

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      • bharris
        bharris last edited by

        I like your color choice. When I think Poe it's always dark, but this is alive. Great watercolor!

        www.brittanyharrisillustration.com/
        www.instagram.com/britillustration/

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        • evilrobot
          evilrobot SVS OG last edited by

          This is a really beautiful illustration. I've always wanted to paint with water colors but I always had trouble getting the scans to look right and just gave up on it.

          http://www.palacioillustration.com/

          https://www.scbwi.org/illustrator-gallery/illustrator-detail/?illustrator_id=84142

          https://www.pinterest.com/evilrobot2/pins/

          https://twitter.com/MyEvilRobot

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          • akerman
            akerman last edited by

            @bharris - Thanks!! My thinking about this one is that even though this isn't a children's tale, I wanted to keep the fantasy bit of the story really bright and colorful, while "reality" is a little more gritty. I hope to bind the illustrations together through the blue color.. I'm posting the two other illustrations below.

            @evilrobot - Thanks a lot! Yeah, the scans can be a bit of a pain... The originals are also too big for the scanner, so stitching them up in Photoshop is really annoying. Thanks a lot Adobe for the function to automatically aligning layers though!

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            • akerman
              akerman last edited by akerman

              The second illustration in the series.
              Here, the person in the story is reading a book he found in a book stall.
              Spoiler alert: The first and last illustration show his lies/fantasies, whereas this one is more grounded in reality, so I tried to make it a little more gritty.
              Don't know if that just made it into a lot less attractive illustration, though 😞
              I also used a fine grain paper whereas the two others are made on satin, which I regret.

              hanspfaall_2.jpg

              The third and currently final illustration in the series:
              The main character in the story has concocted a story about him flying to the moon in a balloon, so I wanted this shot to look really "fantastic".

              hanspfaall_3.jpg

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              • mattramsey
                mattramsey last edited by

                These are really great. Very pro level here.

                https://www.inprnt.com/gallery/mattramsey/
                https://mattramsey.artstation.com/
                https://twitter.com/mramseyART

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                • Odré
                  Odré last edited by

                  I like your work so much! It is amazing!

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                  • akerman
                    akerman last edited by

                    @mattramsey & @Odré Thanks so much, it truly means a lot!

                    I am sort of unsure when it comes to my stylization of things, I see in children's books people who are so great at doing these stylized characters and environments that look "simple" but are really masterful.

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                    • Nancy Gormezano
                      Nancy Gormezano last edited by

                      Wonderful colors, technique, characters, compositions!

                      https://www.facebook.com/nancy.gormezano

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                      • evilrobot
                        evilrobot SVS OG last edited by evilrobot

                        I'm loving these man really cool. That dude's hair is my favorite. One thing that might add just a touch more interest (which you have going on already a little bit in that foreground book and in the shadows in the book case) I wonder if you dapple (just very watered down) some different colors in your shadow areas some different reds, blues, purples, before you lay down your base wash to add that little bit of extra texture so it breaks up the flat washes just tiny bit more. I think it would add a lot , like in this image the character's hair, the coat, and the cover of that book I think a little texture or color variation would look good.

                        http://www.palacioillustration.com/

                        https://www.scbwi.org/illustrator-gallery/illustrator-detail/?illustrator_id=84142

                        https://www.pinterest.com/evilrobot2/pins/

                        https://twitter.com/MyEvilRobot

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                        • MOO
                          MOO SVS OG last edited by

                          I love them all! Wow! So talented.

                          Marsha Ottum Owen

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                          • MOO
                            MOO SVS OG last edited by

                            Also, I like the graininess of the book reader painting.

                            Marsha Ottum Owen

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                            • akerman
                              akerman last edited by

                              Thanks a lot!

                              @evilrobot - Great point, I try to keep the color variation in mind, but sometimes it slips 😞 I'll make sure to focus even more on it!

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                              • Lee White
                                Lee White SVS Team SVS Instructor Pro SVS OG last edited by

                                very nice! love it! : )

                                SVS Faculty Instructor
                                www.leewhiteillustration.com

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                                • bharris
                                  bharris last edited by

                                  @akerman I defiantly see the fantasy element, makes me think you should illustrate Tolkien! These are just beautifully done and a perfect project!

                                  www.brittanyharrisillustration.com/
                                  www.instagram.com/britillustration/

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                                  • natiwata
                                    natiwata SVS OG @akerman last edited by

                                    @akerman What a wonderful style you have! Appealing characters, beautiful color choices. We are actually in a similar place, I have been in an artist in the video game industry for 10 years as well! This is a great forum to help transition to book illustration. If you haven't already, the monthly subscription is beyond worth it for the amount of videos you get.

                                    Nat Iwata
                                    www.iwataillustration.com

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                                    • akerman
                                      akerman last edited by

                                      Thanks for your kind words, everyone!

                                      @lee-white Means a lot! I've started on your lectures about the business side of things, I'm really impressed with how concrete and to the point the information is. I'm looking forward to finishing the class. It's pretty obvious that I have put more focus on my art than on the business, and your class is a great help - the kind of video that I'll buy in addition to being a subscriber in order to go back to in the future 🙂

                                      @bharris - That would be an amazing project! I'm going to see if I can do some smaller and faster spot illustrations for this project as soon as I'm done with a poster for my daughter's room, but then who knows!? 😃

                                      @natiwata - Thanks for the kind words, nice to bump into a fellow games labourer 😉
                                      I have started a subscription, indeed as you say there's so much great information on here! I look forward to going through the classes, I started with Lee Whites business videos, quite an eye-opener 😮

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                                      • Rob Smith
                                        Rob Smith last edited by

                                        I really like your illustrations. Your watercolor work and color choices are great!

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                                        • Charlie Eve Ryan
                                          Charlie Eve Ryan Pro SVS OG last edited by

                                          Really wonderful! Love the characters and they way you are handling the skin tones and overall color. Awesome!

                                          Happy Creating
                                          www.charlieeveryan.com

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