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    • E. Miko

      Feedback wanted for sketch
      Projects • critique illustration sketch composition storytelling • • E. Miko

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      Ayesha Masood

      It looks amazing. May be one of them is the mother and as there are dishes in the background so maybe she’s wearing an apron and has a bit long hair on her. Adding props to the zombies can make them unique i guess

    • Enni Heikura

      I would really appreciate feedback on my illustrations, I´m trying hard to get them to the professional level but don´t know exactly how to improve right now....
      Questions & Comments • illustration feedback childrens book storytelling critique • • Enni Heikura

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      Enni Heikura

      @Nyrryl-Cadiz Hi and thank you for your advice! I totally agree that my hands are not the best one, so they could be definitely improved! All the best for you too!

    • agathe

      Hello from Paris, France
      Introductions • introduction illustration illustrator • • agathe

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      agathe

      @Mike-Babich Thank you!

    • Bianca Davis

      Developing Great Visual Stories - Assignment 2
      SVS Class Work • critique illustration painting • • Bianca Davis

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      Geoffrey Mégardon

      what I see is: the guy in white shirt on the sofa was beaten up by the guy who is holding the wrist of a woman. Probably the white shirt man was drunk and say something inappropriate to the woman. Her boyfriend punched the drunk man as a response. Everyone is shoked by what just happened.

      In terms of feedback, there is something weird happening in the face of the man holding the wrist of a woman. It seems that the face of another woman is blending with his face, while this woman should be in the background.

      Edit: wait, I understood, the man and the woman are "cuddling" a girl, probably their daughter. This is why the girl is in front of the man face but behing the woman's breast. Hence, the drunk man probably said something inappropriate to their daughter.

    • N

      Need feedback for digital art
      Artwork • illustration digital art • • Neal_Blackburn

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      Patricia Dishmon

      Since you're so new at this, maybe do some studies? I say this because you gotta get used to the programs you're using. Also because you're at a stage where literally any action will lead to improvement.
      Doing studies can be a great way to explore different styles as well. Find some art you like and copy it.

    • AngelinaKizz

      March Lucky WIP
      Artwork • illustration critique arena • • AngelinaKizz

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      AngelinaKizz

      @angelinakizz not sure if this bumps things up a bit, I’d love some feedback

    • B

      Expert controlled linework in Photoshop
      Questions & Comments • digital art photoshop illustrator illustration education • • Brett

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      Miriam

      You might want to try out Affinity Designer (which is similar to Adobe Illustrator). https://affinity.serif.com/en-us/designer/
      With Designer, you can create vector shapes, and apply raster textures or brushes.

      "Switch between full featured vector and raster workspaces ... Add raster brush texture to your illustrations, ... mask and add grain to your crisp vectors"

      I can't remember for sure (since I have both), but you might need to get Affinity Photo as well as Affinity Designer in order to use the raster features in Designer.

      I was very excited when I saw that you can work with vector & raster in the same program. I'm just a beginner with this, but you can check out their website for examples.
      At the website above, scroll down to "Vector or raster, you decide" & you can toggle the raster effects on & off to see the difference on a vector illustration.
      Here's a short demo video that shows how you can paint raster images, or apply a raster texture to a vector shape in Designer: https://affinity.serif.com/en-us/tutorials/designer/desktop/video/338830412/

      Affinity can export as (save as) all the major file types, including .psd — I haven't personally tried sending a .psd file to someone who uses Photoshop, so I can't vouch for it, but I really like the Affinity programs.

    • ChrisConnor

      E-LEO-MENTA feedback
      Artwork • illustration digital art concept art fantasy characterdesign • • ChrisConnor

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      G

      I like the render quality in the background and the lava in the paws, but i think that most of the problems are with the fundamentals of the drawing. The anatomical structure of the lion is kinda off and i think that you are shooting yourself in the foot while trying a complicated perspective for a piece that is really demanding on textures and lighting. Its obvious the amount of love you put in a project, but i think that your focus should be on the foundations rather than the finishing touches.

    • ChrisConnor

      E-LEO-MENTA Feedback please
      Artwork • art illustration digital art digital drawing digital • • ChrisConnor

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      ChrisConnor

      Hello everybody, it's been a while!
      A couple months ago I posted a few pieces about a mini series I was doing of Lions that made up the 4 elements.
      I've just about finished the final one which is fire but I just would like some feedback. I really like it, but something feels off to me and I feel like it's because there isn't enough contrast between the background sky and the foreground rock or if it's between the rock and the lion. Perhaps is that there is too much detail in the background and it needs simplifying? Maybe it's all of the above...
      Another set of eyes would help.
      Thanks in advance
      Chris

      Screenshot 2021-09-01 at 18.44.13.pngi

    • Abigail Hookham

      COLOUR HELP - I'm stuck!
      Artwork • colour help wip illustration • • Abigail Hookham

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      @Abigail-Hookham The changes definitely made this a stronger image. Thanks for sharing the updates.

    • sirjana

      Hello fellow artists!
      Introductions • illustration introduction • • sirjana

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      jdeebella

      @sirjana hi! Just hit follow on instagram, I can see your fellowship at mats too 🙂 your style is really lovely and professional, welcome on the SVSLearn forum.

    • Hi there!
      Introductions • illustration newstudent introduction childrens book 3pperspective • • Kara_Bazley

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      Kara_Bazley

      @Elisabeth-Rae Aw thank you so much, I appreciate it!
      You're very kind 🙂

    • Alzamon

      Hi everyone from Costa Rica 🦥 🇨🇷
      Introductions • costarica alzamon illustration • • Alzamon

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      ellenseal_art

      Buenas!

      I lived in Tarcoles for 2 years and miss it so much. It's great to see a Tico on the forums 🙂

      Thanks for sharing your playful artwork. I'm looking forward to seeing more!

    • ChrisConnor

      Advice for a possible job please
      General Discussion • illustration commission advice • • ChrisConnor

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      ChrisConnor

      @Norman-Morana Thanks a lot for this 🙂 Appreciate it!

    • ChrisConnor

      Creatures of the deep
      Artwork • art illustration concept mermay dragon • • ChrisConnor

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      ChrisConnor

      @jdubz thank you for this, really helpful 🙂

    • ChrisConnor

      MerMay 2021 art share
      Artwork • mermay artwork illustration concept character desig • • ChrisConnor

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      ChrisConnor

      Hey guys! I wanted to share some more of my MerMay artwork. Feel free to drop yours below in the comments below! Hope you guys like:)
      I'd also be down for following some more artists so also feel free to leave your IG handles too!

      Mine is @chrisconnorartist.

      These were prompted from the list provided by the official website.
      Here you have
      Day 4: Star Wars
      Day 6: Sunday
      Day 7: Provocative
      Day 11: Frustration

      Screenshot_20210504-191905_Gallery.jpg Screenshot_20210506-204446_Gallery.jpg 20210511_152905.jpg Screenshot_20210511-152156_Gallery.jpg

    • ChrisConnor

      MerMay the Fourth Be With You
      Artwork • illustration mermay star wars day disney artwork • • ChrisConnor

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      ChrisConnor

      @ruth Thank you 🙂

    • emergingeden

      Critique requested
      General Discussion • critique characterdesign illustration fairytale march • • emergingeden

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      Freya Chakour

      she look so cute!! and just a little thing, but the ears in the first pose are a bit to high, also the left pocket on her backside is a bit to much to the right side. also I really love how you rendered her her at the last post! looks so fluffy and beautiful!

    • phoenix yip

      Which one do you like best?
      Projects • thumbnails critique study illustration • • phoenix yip

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      phoenix yip

      @RachelArmington i see. thanks for the advice!