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    • jahn

      Share July HTFYA Ideas & WIP - (Food Truck)
      General Discussion • wip how to fix art ideas inspiration • • jahn

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      Larue

      @Arthur-Campling
      Thanks for the detailed response! I love my pencil sketches but they lose their “life” when I redraw over them in procreate. I’ll be rethinking my process.

    • Griffin McPherson

      WIP help with values
      Questions & Comments • feedback wip • • Griffin McPherson

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      Griffin McPherson

      @Geoffrey-Mégardon
      Took your advice! I think I’m happy with where the piece is at now but if you have any other feedback I’d love to hear it.
      IMG_2733.jpeg

    • Griffin McPherson

      WIP feedback
      Projects • bookcover wip feedback • • Griffin McPherson

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      Griffin McPherson

      @AngelinaKizz thanks, I’ll check it out!

    • Abigail Hookham

      Please help me make part of my illustration stand out more!
      Projects • critique help picturebook wip advice • • Abigail Hookham

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      Kim Rosenlof

      @Abigail-Hookham This is so cute, and the bottles definitely stand out more now.

    • stayhomejoe

      Early American gnome
      Projects • wip • • stayhomejoe

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      kayleenartlover

      @stayhomejoe one thing I noticed with all the heads, remember that skulls stick out a bit in the back to make room for the brain. So make sure that your heads are the same way. Using a reference can help.
      "Sam Does Art" is a super helpful youtube channel and he often does critiques and mentions using his skull prop, calling it "the skull of his enemies" haha

    • Georgios Christopoulos

      Rabbit/Dragon Road race wip! Come give your 2 cents!
      Projects • critique arena wip characterdesign childrens book challenge • • Georgios Christopoulos

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      PenAndrew

      @Georgios-Christopoulos In fact I liked the first image you posted best, as it looked cleaner and really comic book.

    • lizardillo

      Swimming tigers (attempt 2)
      Contest • feedback wip • • lizardillo

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      ruth

      I'm not getting any Godzilla vibes, looks great to me! 🙂 My only other thought is that she could be holding her head in a kind of exasperated way? But I like the way her paws fill the space and lead you into the scene, so probably perfect as it is. 🐯 Good luck! Looking forward to seeing the finished piece.

    • randarrington

      Thumbs for a Alice in Wonderland Rabbit Commission WIP
      Projects • wip feedback commission critique • • randarrington

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      randarrington

      @larue hmmm...maybe...I'll but some thought into fixing for sure. Thank you for your feedback!!!!! I'm looking forward to seeing it in color too. 😃

    • Abigail Hookham

      COLOUR HELP - I'm stuck!
      Artwork • colour help wip illustration • • Abigail Hookham

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      D

      @Abigail-Hookham The changes definitely made this a stronger image. Thanks for sharing the updates.

    • Georgios Christopoulos

      "You are late hero" Work in progress!I ll share every step!
      Artwork • sketch progress wip digital art • • Georgios Christopoulos

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      Fey Realme

      @Georgios-Christopoulos looks nice! I cant wait to see the rest of the journey!

    • TaniaGomesArt

      Starting Prop Design Course
      Projects • wip critique • • TaniaGomesArt

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      TaniaGomesArt

      Hello everyone.
      After 3 or 4 months going around the fundamentals on level 1, I gave the step to level 2 and started the prop design course.

      For my lamp, and because I clearly hate myself so I go for a super complex thing right on, I went for a portable magical lamp. A quick resume of the idea is that it is a lamp made by the magicians engineers (think fantasy world, with magical technology, kind of a mix between fantasy and steampunk), and it's used for explorations purposes, like mines, dungeons, stuff like that. Its on and off switch is with magic, so if you are not a magical person, you are out of luck with these, sorry.

      A note is that is not intended to be specifically for children's books, so regarding style, that's not important for me.

      So I made my silhouettes:
      Screenshot 2021-07-09 at 11.38.48.png

      And then chose one idea, made 2 thumbnails, and a quick sketch:
      Screenshot 2021-07-09 at 11.45.36.png

      I know I should have probably try a simpler lamp to start, but hey, it's learning. Wether I end up being able to pull it off and all the struggle will teach me a lot, or I am not and will learn a ton from that too, and then try again with a simpler concept.

      One of my major concerns at this point is the 1/2 vs 1/3 rule. When I got to the end I realised I didn't really thought of that, and since it is a somehow symmetrical design, am wondering if something should/needs to be done relating that?

      I also know that in here, I may not being able yet to show the entire concept on how each part is exactly, but basically, imagine a glass ball, but in this case is more of an egg shape (and is more of a magic crystal than glass). Then the top, bottom and those lines on the wingy shapes are a metal structure that keeps it all together. Was this more or less clear for you just by looking at the image, or were you so lost that you couldn't even understand how this could be a lamp?

      Thank you.

    • ellenseal_art

      May WIP - Greenhouse Situation
      Contest • critique feedback wip • • ellenseal_art

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      ellenseal_art

      @ajillustrates Haha...I'll try it! Lighting is not my strong suit so I'm unsure I'll pull it off. Worth experimenting with though - thanks!

    • lizardillo

      Buzzbee's sticky or not-so-sticky situation – WIP
      Contest • wip feedback critique • • lizardillo

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      ajillustrates

      @lizardillo My brain kept telling me the same thing about the honey, but I told it to shut up and enjoy the art 😉

    • Georgios Christopoulos

      May Contest Progress! Check it out and share your opinions!
      Sketchbook • may wip critique arena wip • • Georgios Christopoulos

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      Georgios Christopoulos

      Alright,I m calling this done!
      In the journey of searching and avenging the shark goblins who have Josephs underwater village under capture, some mistakes were made by the young at heart Dominic.
      He stays fierce though,no problem at all!!
      Always having a blast with full illustrations!!

      TRAVELLER SCENE FINAL.jpg

    • lizardillo

      The BUZZ-INN wip
      Artwork • wip feedback critique • • lizardillo

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      chrisaakins

      @lizardillo or is that bad beehive-yer. 😉

    • lizardillo

      March contest. Feedback would BEE lovely thanks :)
      Artwork • contest feedback wip • • lizardillo

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      lizardillo

      Sorry about the delay but I just wanted to say thank you for the help and support with this. It’s my first time posting a WIP and figure/face design is something I really need to work on which I why I took on the brief as a personal challenge. I actually decided to give up on this at one point because I was struggling a lot. The feedback helped me to decide to go for it at the last minute (and finished at 3.30am UK time to hit the MST time zone deadline). Thank you, I really appreciate it.

    • Valerie Light

      March WIP space traveler
      Contest • wip feedback contest • • Valerie Light

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      Valerie Light

      @HeatherBouteneff Oh awesome! Let me know if I get the official Mira seal of approval from her!

    • Georgios Christopoulos

      Yeti Home Progress!!
      Artwork • yeti contest illustration portfolio wip • • Georgios Christopoulos

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      Georgios Christopoulos

      Final Version!!
      Winslow is in trouble!!

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    • Meg Clayburn

      Yeti WIP
      General Discussion • wip contest december yeti concept • • Meg Clayburn

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      D

      I agree, 1 and 4 are great. love the eyebrows and the dragging hands.

    • sigross

      Slowvember Water Dragon WIP
      Artwork • wip slowvember artwork • • sigross

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      sigross

      @Nyrryl-Cadiz Nice one. I'm looking forward to slowing down and just making one piece this month. Are you making something for Slowvember?