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    • Georgios Christopoulos

      May Contest Progress! Check it out and share your opinions!
      Sketchbook • may wip critique arena wip • • Georgios Christopoulos

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      Georgios Christopoulos

      Alright,I m calling this done!
      In the journey of searching and avenging the shark goblins who have Josephs underwater village under capture, some mistakes were made by the young at heart Dominic.
      He stays fierce though,no problem at all!!
      Always having a blast with full illustrations!!

      TRAVELLER SCENE FINAL.jpg

    • charitymunoz

      May WIP (Ok, I'm doing this!)
      Artwork • may wip isolation • • charitymunoz

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      theprairiefox

      @charitymunoz I love the caterpillar. Very cute.

      One thing you might think about is your composition and focal point. Right now the caterpillar is dead center in the middle of the composition. That is usually not desired. Moving him to one of the hot spots (on the thirds) and adding some secondary focal points might go a long way.

      Looking good! Can’t wait to see the next revision.