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    • E. Miko

      Feedback wanted for sketch
      Projects • critique illustration sketch composition storytelling • • E. Miko

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      Ayesha Masood

      It looks amazing. May be one of them is the mother and as there are dishes in the background so maybe she’s wearing an apron and has a bit long hair on her. Adding props to the zombies can make them unique i guess

    • ?

      Unique and Appealing Character Design - Beauty and the Beast Meets Fluffy Monsters
      SVS Class Work • classwork characterdesign sketch feedback • • A Former User

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      ?

      @Frogpunzel YES! I know what you mean. I think you really have to think way outside the box for this one!! πŸ™‚ Good luck!

    • simonaburlacu

      Draw 50 things challenge - Santa's factory
      SVS Class Work • draw50things sketch christmas composition storytelling • • simonaburlacu

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      simonaburlacu

      Hi, @adam-thornton-0 ! Thanks a lot for your feedback and ideas. I will try to paint Santa dark on light. I like your idea with hard edges. I really feel like the objects are being lost on the background. I do need to push this more. I would love to see your Santa's factory illustration too!

    • ambria

      Perspective Drawing Feedback
      Sketchbook • feedback drawing sketch perspective shadows • • ambria

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      ambria

      @Nico-Ecenarro Thanks for the feedback! I appreciate it!

    • Georgios Christopoulos

      "You are late hero" Work in progress!I ll share every step!
      Artwork • sketch progress wip digital art • • Georgios Christopoulos

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      Fey Realme

      @Georgios-Christopoulos looks nice! I cant wait to see the rest of the journey!

    • Georgios Christopoulos

      Opinion on the design of this Nintendo mascots print?
      Artwork • critique opinions portfolio sketch • • Georgios Christopoulos

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      Matthew Oberdier

      I would make the front characters a little bigger and try to overlap them some.

    • hakepe

      Need feedback with my sketch.
      Projects • sketch feedback drawing • • hakepe

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      hakepe

      Here is the finished piece after many many corrections. Thank you all for your help and feed back. Now of to the next challenge of drawing πŸ™‚

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    • Ari Sorokin

      Art advice
      Artwork • sketch black and white • • Ari Sorokin

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      Nyrryl  Cadiz

      @Ari-Sorokin Hi! I think both of your styles are amazing. What is that's bothering you? Is it that you can't do backgrounds in color?

    • MyArt Multiverse

      July Prompt Thumbnails
      Artwork • prompt bookcover critique thumbnails sketch • • MyArt Multiverse

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      Nyrryl  Cadiz

      @MyArt-Multiverse cool concept!

    • Georgios Christopoulos

      Showcasing the steps of making a Digital Illo.
      Projects • artwork digital art illustration sketch inking • • Georgios Christopoulos

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      Georgios Christopoulos

      Hi guys!

      I m currently working on a step to step timelapse video for my followers on IG ,
      regarding the stages I go through when making a digital illustration.

      I upload a step every day ,and I answer questions regarding that step.
      Figured I d share this here if anyone is interested to see another approach to art , and also to get feedback and critiques.

      Here is the first four steps I made , rough concept-sketch-inks-colour blocked.
      If you have any questions, feel free to share!

      Cheers!
      G-Chris

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    • G

      Gestual drawing critiques
      Sketchbook • gesture drawing critique study figure drawing sketch • • Guilherme Cavalcante

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      I'm not an expert when it comes to gesture drawing so I can't give much of a critique. But the first and third image are my favorite, I think it is becuase of the strong straights vs curves that you are playing with. Michael Parker's new course has a good section on gesture drawing (along with +400 non-nude images to draw from) and we have a course dedicated to gesture drawing coming next month! Brooklyn Walker, a character designer at Sony animation is teaching that course.

    • CharlieLP

      WIP January Contest
      Artwork • wip sketch contest • • CharlieLP

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      TessaW

      Fun! It reads clearly to me (I think). Godzilla tromping through the snow to go destroy the city? I'd suggest sketching out a few different options for both the pose and the overall shape of the smoke. I think these two elements have a lot of potential to affect the impact of the piece, and it's worth trying out a few options to fine tune things.

      Great job, and a fun interpretation of the prompt. πŸ™‚

    • I

      Feedback
      Artwork • feedback critique sketch • • IanS

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      Laurie

      This is great! Love the comic feel of it and you can imagine what the wizard is saying or would love to say.....anyone with kids or pets could relate, I'm sure πŸ˜‰

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    • L

      Drawing Fundamentals/Inking sketch - could you make a critique?
      Artwork • sketch critique sketchbook • • Lola

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      @tombarrettillo

      You're 100% right. Thanks. I imposed the drawing on the original photo and just cut the drawing and pasted the pieces so that they match the original. Here is the before and after. It shows where the faults are, how his body is too much to the front. Cool.

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    • C

      Character Designs Little piggie
      Introductions • illustration sketch sketchbook gouache watercolor • • corlettedoug

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      Leontine

      very cute!

    • laurencrest

      Jadis White Witch Thumbnails
      General Discussion • illustration critique thumbnails portfolio sketch • • laurencrest

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      laurencrest

      @evilrobot Thanks for your feedback! Since I've already started on the second piece in pencil I'll work on what I can change (mostly the wolf at this point) and keep the suggestions in mind for future pieces. I initially choose to have the composition centered because I wanted to emphasize the starting and ending point for this character and wasn't sure another composition would highlight the differences as well as a centered comp. In the future I'll try making it less balanced and more dynamic.

      I agree the first image is still super rough. I think I'll see about adding kids in the alley way to take up some of the space and move the main character as well. There does seem to be a lot of dead space in the first image. I didn't notice it before. I'll have to see what I can do to fix the composition and the blank space.

    • Pamela Fraley

      March 3D thurs concept sketch
      General Discussion • 3d thursday bear concept sketch • • Pamela Fraley

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      mattramsey

      great concept--However, I would really push the size of the bear if I were you. Maybe, due to the fact that you aren't supposed to have boarders on this one, the bear could actually be popping out of the scene.

    • Rich Green

      My first attempt at traditional timed figure and gesture drawing
      Sketchbook • gesture drawing figure drawing sketch sketchbook • • Rich Green

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      MOO

      Thanks for sharing this! I think I'll go try it too πŸ™‚

    • amberwingart

      AmberwingArt's Sketchbook 12/12
      General Discussion • sketchbook sketch animals wildlife • • amberwingart

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      Bobby Aquitania

      Alas I can't commit to anything, my life is too unpredictable right now because of my health. The monthly challenge is good for me because it allows me to skip several days if I have to... 😞

    • carlossketches

      First 3rd Thu: Dec Santa's Magic Beard WIP
      General Discussion • 3rd thursday sketch wip • • carlossketches

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      carlossketches

      @Dulcie a second piece!! i think I will, but maybe not for 3rd Thursday. Took some pictures of a toy train at work, I think I'll use that as reference.

      thanks for the encouragement.