Did I fix my art? March prompt

[Enni Heikura]

@Yiming-Wu Thank you, I will!

[Tamzin]

It’s lovely!

[Fey Realme]

@Nyrryl-Cadiz wow that is suddenly a billion times more readable, although im still not sure if they are grooming a griffin or carving one out of stone

[Nyrryl Cadiz]

@R-Fey-Realme true. This is definitely just a quick fix

[kayleenartlover]

It is still very hard to see what the kid is doing. I think he should stand out a bit more. One of his arms is blending in like a tangent with the leg of the statue, both arms actually. You have to kind of squint and ignore everything else to notice that an accident happened.
Maybe copy and past the canvas and drop the color completely to a black and white image. Then see where you can add more contrast so the kid is the first or second thing you notice happening.

[NessIllustration]

@Enni-Heikura I think the values should help you create contrast in important areas to bring the viewer's attention there. Your biggest problem with this image is the lamp pointing at the statue, making the entire middle area very bright. Since your statue is pale too, it doesn't stand out at all against the white, pale yellow background surrounding it.

While the second version does use more of a range of values, it's a bit intense and uses pure black shadows which feels too dark. At the same time, all the dark parts are concentrated in the borders and corners, leaving the center bright and not solving your core issue of lack of contrast on the statue.

You could remove the lamp to have the pale statue stand out against a darker background. OR you could have a pale background like in your old version, and simply make the statue a darker color (like dark wood, or a dark gold color for example).

[Enni Heikura]

@kayleenartlover Thank you for your feedback! I noticed the tangent now myself . I agree that the focus isn't clear enough on where to look. I've also done that, looking at the values in black and white It still needs some consideration...

[Enni Heikura]

@NessIllustration Thanks for your advice and feedback! I did consider that when working on this, that if I include a lamp, the room should be at least somewhat dim, and if the statue is light gray, it might be challenging to bring out the light in it. My initial idea was that the room would be in daylight; perhaps I could also try the approach of making the statue clearly darker and the lamp maybe broken. I have to find some time to refine this

[Sarah VanDam]

@Enni-Heikura Hi Enni! I took some time to try and figure out how I would solve this rendering puzzle. I’m curious—what’s your setup for drawing digitally? Do you have a stylus or tablet of some kind? I don’t know how Autodesk works. I’ve been working in Procreate. Here are some of the things I did:

-I knocked back the opacity of everything in the background (I cut out the background with the lasso tool and lowered the opacity to 40%)
-Using a soft watercolor brush as an eraser, I erased out some of the corners of the image to vignette it more.
-Redrew the lamp stand legs slightly.
-Added flat colors to everything mostly using a “multiply” layer and a hard inking brush (clearly, I decided to go with no dramatic lighting and even next to no shadow)
-Added watercolor texture on an “overlay” layer and then reduced the opacity to make it subtler.
-Bumped the character over to the left and tried to make it clearer that the leg got cracked (I’ll admit I think I drew the feet wrong. It should just be the toes on the ground. The way I drew it, it’s like the griffin has two ankles, haha).

[Enni Heikura]

@Sarah-VanDam Hi Sarah! I really appreciate your effort. Overall, I love how helpful everyone is and how they want to solve this puzzle.

I use a tablet and pen, which are connected to the computer (XP-Pen), some cheapest version of it . And on the computer, I have Autodesk Sketchbook free version.

You have some good suggestions for this. At first, I also considered having just a few colors or something similar in the background. But I wanted to challenge myself and try to make the figures in the center stand out even if there are other colors in the background. It still needs a lot of practice.

I like that the griffin's foot is broken on the left side, it stands out much better than the original.

Thank you again for all your help. When I find the time, I'll try to use all these useful tips and suggestions.