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    Jubilee from X-Men WIP Please Critique!

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    • Brian Lynch
      Brian Lynch last edited by

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      Hello all, beginner artist here, working my way through the curriculum in the hopes of being a cover and gallery artist one day. Here is a pencil drawing I did of Jubilee from X-Men, harsh critiques welcome!

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      • MerryMary
        MerryMary @Brian Lynch last edited by

        @Brian-Lynch I love xmen and jubilee is pretty cool 😎 I think my one critique is that her head looks a little small for the rest of her body. Over all I really like it 🙂

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        • Jeremiahbrown
          Jeremiahbrown last edited by Jeremiahbrown

          My advice would be to look at references specifically to nail the anatomy and clothing of the figure. The hips and bosom are particularly confusing. I did a sketch over to demonstrate where the pelvis and leg bones connect to be more convincing. The style and feel are great though! After using references I think it will look awesome.
          jubileeskell.jpgjubileemorefinished.jpg

          Jeremiah Brown
          www.jeremiahbrownillustration.com
          https://www.instagram.com/jeremiah.brownillustration/

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          • Brian Lynch
            Brian Lynch @MerryMary last edited by

            @MerryMary Hey Thanks!! Yeah now that I'm looking at it again her head is kind of small, appreciate the feedback!

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            • Brian Lynch
              Brian Lynch @Jeremiahbrown last edited by

              @Jeremiahbrown Hey thanks for the feedback, this is really helpful! I'm just starting to learn anatomy so I will definitely take what you have taught me and apply it. Appreciate it!

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