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    • evilrobot
      evilrobot SVS OG @smceccarelli last edited by evilrobot

      @smceccarelli I agree the the lettering looks generic compared to the wonderful art. You need a better font or some hand written text.

      http://www.palacioillustration.com/

      https://www.scbwi.org/illustrator-gallery/illustrator-detail/?illustrator_id=84142

      https://www.pinterest.com/evilrobot2/pins/

      https://twitter.com/MyEvilRobot

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      • Jana
        Jana last edited by

        Thanks, @Di07, @dan-tavis, @smceccarelli, @evilrobot for your feedback and comments!
        I will definitely work on the typography, I think I will go for handwriting. Thank you so much for that idea. That will be new for me, so if thesomebody can give my any suggestions, they are very welcome. 🙂

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        • Jana
          Jana last edited by

          Hi guys! I am just preparing to work on my typography. I found a great source of inspiration, not just for comics. It might also be interesting for you, if you look for picture book lettering or title fonts:
          http://www.1001freefonts.com/

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          • Timbdsf
            Timbdsf last edited by

            Oooh, I love your designs. Great work!

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            • Jana
              Jana last edited by

              Following @smceccarelli and @evilrobot I started working on the lettering. I started with the text bubbles. What do you like more: the original one, using a GIMP font or the hand written text? I would say that the hand writing fits more to Peppers lively character. But I am not sure and would like to hear other opinions. Thanks in advance! 🙂0_1463160151641_Storm - Szene 1 Panel 4 textvergleich Gimpwriting.jpg
              0_1463160167916_Storm - Szene 1 Panel 4 textvergleich Handwriting.jpg

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              • smceccarelli
                smceccarelli Pro SVS OG @Jana last edited by

                @Jana I definitely like the second one better. But maybe you can try to transform your own handwriting into a font? Jake Parker mentions how to do this at the end of his course on drawing comics.

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                • Jana
                  Jana last edited by

                  Thanks for the feedback! 😊 I will definitely try that.

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                  • Jana
                    Jana last edited by

                    @smceccarelli
                    I installed my own handwriting font. It was really fun working on that. 🙂 What do you think? Is that appealing enough?
                    0_1463239464910_WP_20160514_17_19_27_Pro.jpg
                    0_1463239483237_Storm - Szene 1 Panel 4 textvergleich Janas Handwriting.jpg

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                    • smceccarelli
                      smceccarelli Pro SVS OG @Jana last edited by

                      @Jana I think this looks beautiful - and it has the same personality as the drawing!

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                      • Jana
                        Jana last edited by

                        Thank you so much, @smceccarelli! That means really a lot to me. 🙂
                        I will change the other text accordingly, and I will also see if I can improve the soundwords.

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