Work Book Exersise
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Here is the original image adjusted using a light beam to highlight the main characters and blurring the object around the characters making more of a focus.
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RE: Accidental Success
@Steve-Young I like it a lot actually. Feels more finished, clean, focused. I also like that it brings out so much texture. I'm a sucker for texture.
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Beautiful painting! I love the light coming through the trees! It really looks like a traditional painting. Great job!
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This is much better @Steve-Young
My eye seems to know exactly where to look! -
This absolutely has better focus and feels more organized, great job!
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Thank you, your word of appreciation is err appreciated.
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Very nice! I like the soft brushwork. I wonder about maybe adding a pale color, to the background? (unless the assignment said not to--I see it says value pattern, but can't see the whole thing--which class is it from?) Maybe the leaves in the middle trees could be a bit more faded and generalized? The squirrel is lovely and the front tree is great. I think the light beam would have a color and hit the mushrooms too (though light sources are not my strong point). I'm not sure about it shining directly on the squirrel--usually light beams cover more area. But just for the exercise it works well to make the focal point (and so does the near black and white part).
I think you have 25 items even without the other animals!
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@Vicky-Vicky thanks about mentioning about the issues your raised, I am away of some of them. Thought to complete the image I had to make some sacrifices. The assignment is from the creative composition. Thanks for the feedback much appreciated.
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I think you did a great job. The assignment was to make a clear tonal structure and focal point, which you did. If you later want to add color or whatever it's up to you, but you started with a really complicated image with many animals and simplified it. I really liked the way you do animals (I'm partial to animals) and look forward to seeing more of your work.
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Thanks! Regarding the animals, they were fun to do, I captured thee silhouettes then forms and finally added there detail.
