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    Inkling - my Inktober project

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    • mcucchi
      mcucchi last edited by

      Great work! This is really fun!

      portfolio: moniquecucchi.com
      instagram.com/crookedandbeautiful
      shop: crookedandbeautiful.com

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      • smceccarelli
        smceccarelli Pro SVS OG last edited by

        Page 7. I know I timed all of this, but it feels funny to be in the middle of October and not even remotely mid-way through the story....
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        • smceccarelli
          smceccarelli Pro SVS OG last edited by smceccarelli

          Page 8 - this is the first page where I feel my inking has gotten slightly better....but it may get worse again 😉
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          • evilrobot
            evilrobot SVS OG last edited by

            Looks good....:)

            http://www.palacioillustration.com/

            https://www.scbwi.org/illustrator-gallery/illustrator-detail/?illustrator_id=84142

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            • smceccarelli
              smceccarelli Pro SVS OG last edited by

              Page 9 - now I am halfway through the story!

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              • smceccarelli
                smceccarelli Pro SVS OG last edited by

                And the big bad, woefully time-consuming central spread....took me three days of drawing (back in September) and one full day of inking...
                But this was the image I had in my head that triggered the whole story three years ago...so happy to have it out of my system now...
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                • Kevin Longueil
                  Kevin Longueil SVS OG @smceccarelli last edited by

                  @smceccarelli Beautiful!!

                  Portfolio: kevinlongueil.com
                  https://www.instagram.com/kevinlongueil/

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                  • Dulcie
                    Dulcie SVS OG last edited by

                    It is such a huge project to do all of this! I'm enjoying the story you've created, and wondering what is going to happen next! My main thought (not as a critique but just as an interested reader of the story), was after he saw the first creature come to life...when he started drawing more bizarre creatures, I wanted to tell him not to do that - maybe would better to test the theory by drawing a cute kitty cat, a huge chest of treasure, a pot of cash (or a pretty companion even!)... but then that might not make such a fun story 🙂

                    So I will look forward to seeing what happens, after the ink goes down the drain!

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                    • smceccarelli
                      smceccarelli Pro SVS OG @Dulcie last edited by

                      @Dulcie He is an irresponsible young artist 😉

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                      • smceccarelli
                        smceccarelli Pro SVS OG last edited by

                        Page 12!
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                        • evilrobot
                          evilrobot SVS OG last edited by

                          Lol....yep that is what men would do....

                          http://www.palacioillustration.com/

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                          https://twitter.com/MyEvilRobot

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                          • smceccarelli
                            smceccarelli Pro SVS OG @evilrobot last edited by

                            @evilrobot That is why I called him Adam 🙂

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                            • smceccarelli
                              smceccarelli Pro SVS OG last edited by

                              Page 13

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                              • Russ Van Dine
                                Russ Van Dine last edited by

                                too cool

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                                • smceccarelli
                                  smceccarelli Pro SVS OG last edited by

                                  Page 14 and 15 - almost there!

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                                  • evilrobot
                                    evilrobot SVS OG @smceccarelli last edited by

                                    @smceccarelli It's looking great. Love the story.

                                    http://www.palacioillustration.com/

                                    https://www.scbwi.org/illustrator-gallery/illustrator-detail/?illustrator_id=84142

                                    https://www.pinterest.com/evilrobot2/pins/

                                    https://twitter.com/MyEvilRobot

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                                    • smceccarelli
                                      smceccarelli Pro SVS OG last edited by

                                      The last three pages!
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                                      • Dulcie
                                        Dulcie SVS OG last edited by

                                        Congratulations on finishing such a mammoth project! You must have had enough of inking for at least a few days, now 😉

                                        It is a very clever story, beautifully drawn and I've enjoyed finding out each day what happens next! I was pleased that at least he tried to do something sensible with the ink by drawing a lovely lady companion...then I was worried for him...and what a bittersweet ending. I like that you left it ambiguous. Great job 🙂

                                        www.dulciemascord.com
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                                        • evilrobot
                                          evilrobot SVS OG last edited by

                                          Congrats on finishing up the project! Great ending.

                                          http://www.palacioillustration.com/

                                          https://www.scbwi.org/illustrator-gallery/illustrator-detail/?illustrator_id=84142

                                          https://www.pinterest.com/evilrobot2/pins/

                                          https://twitter.com/MyEvilRobot

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                                          • Kevin Longueil
                                            Kevin Longueil SVS OG last edited by

                                            @smceccarelli What I loved best about your story was that I did not predict any of your next pages along the way - one of my favorite unexpected bits was that he slept on the floor and was not in any way a cad - I loved the gestures of the cat and what he added to the narrative of each panel too - a fantastic and sad story - this is a really great piece of work you have made!!
                                            ( I hope you are working on a book of some kind)

                                            Portfolio: kevinlongueil.com
                                            https://www.instagram.com/kevinlongueil/

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