Inkling - my Inktober project
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 Great work! This is really fun! 
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 Page 7. I know I timed all of this, but it feels funny to be in the middle of October and not even remotely mid-way through the story.... 
  
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 Page 8 - this is the first page where I feel my inking has gotten slightly better....but it may get worse again  
  
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 Looks good....:) 
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 Page 9 - now I am halfway through the story!  
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 And the big bad, woefully time-consuming central spread....took me three days of drawing (back in September) and one full day of inking... 
 But this was the image I had in my head that triggered the whole story three years ago...so happy to have it out of my system now...
  
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 @smceccarelli Beautiful!! 
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 It is such a huge project to do all of this! I'm enjoying the story you've created, and wondering what is going to happen next! My main thought (not as a critique but just as an interested reader of the story), was after he saw the first creature come to life...when he started drawing more bizarre creatures, I wanted to tell him not to do that - maybe would better to test the theory by drawing a cute kitty cat, a huge chest of treasure, a pot of cash (or a pretty companion even!)... but then that might not make such a fun story  So I will look forward to seeing what happens, after the ink goes down the drain! 
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 @Dulcie He is an irresponsible young artist  
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 Page 12! 
  
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 Lol....yep that is what men would do.... 
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 @evilrobot That is why I called him Adam  
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 Page 13  
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 too cool 
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 Page 14 and 15 - almost there!   
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 @smceccarelli It's looking great. Love the story. 
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 The last three pages! 
  
  
  
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 Congratulations on finishing such a mammoth project! You must have had enough of inking for at least a few days, now  It is a very clever story, beautifully drawn and I've enjoyed finding out each day what happens next! I was pleased that at least he tried to do something sensible with the ink by drawing a lovely lady companion...then I was worried for him...and what a bittersweet ending. I like that you left it ambiguous. Great job  
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 Congrats on finishing up the project! Great ending. 
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 @smceccarelli What I loved best about your story was that I did not predict any of your next pages along the way - one of my favorite unexpected bits was that he slept on the floor and was not in any way a cad - I loved the gestures of the cat and what he added to the narrative of each panel too - a fantastic and sad story - this is a really great piece of work you have made!! 
 ( I hope you are working on a book of some kind)
 
			
		 
			
		 
			
		 
			
		