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    • Jana
      Jana last edited by

      Hi guys! I am still not 100% sure which will be the final style for my Grimms story. So, to find the right path, I thought a "draw 100 somethings" challenge might help me to feel more settled. I will go with 100 trees.
      Actually, the number makes me a bit nervous, but there is no time limit, right? 😉
      My biggest inspiration in the moment is Eyvind Earle. I admire his graphic style. So here is my first tree. Please, feel free to comment, to correct, to critique.
      And a happy new year to you all!
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      • Jana
        Jana last edited by

        Hi guys, here is tree number 2.
        Bests!
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        • RobinSlee
          RobinSlee last edited by

          If I had to choose, then tree one over tree two. But don't stop here... Keep pushing 😉

          Site: Idrawcreatures.com
          Shop: RobinSleeDesigns.etsy.com

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          • Jana
            Jana last edited by

            I agree, Robin. I also like the first better. 🙂 For the first I used a photo reference, but not for the second. That might be a reason. Just now I try another one. Coming soon... Thanks for stopping by. 🙂

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            • Jana
              Jana last edited by

              So, here is number tree number three.
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              • Jana
                Jana last edited by

                And tree number four.
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                • Jana
                  Jana last edited by

                  Today I tried something else and played a bit with a different style. I gave it a paper texture and a more handcrafted look. Do you have any preference when you compare the last two trees?

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                  • DanetteDraws
                    DanetteDraws @Jana last edited by

                    @Jana cut paper look, definitely! I like the shape and style of your first tree best so far though - that, but with the cut paper look 🙂 Also - what if you gave the final rendered trees more detail/texture? I'm liking your original sketches better than the final for that exact reason. Like on the first tree sketch, I like how there's vertical lines that give it some life. Maybe I'm not the best one to give advice though - I really don't care for the digital look. I'd take "hand-drawn looking" any day.

                    https://danettebyatt.com
                    Twitter @DanetteDraws
                    Instagram @DanetteDraws

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                    • Jana
                      Jana last edited by

                      @DanetteDraws Hi, Danette! Thanks for your very valuable feedback. Yes, the first one is still one of my favorites, too. 🙂
                      I was scratching my head about the same things you did, particularly to put some more appeal and life to it. Right now I am experimenting on how I can get more details into these images. I am bit lost in that... I guess I will pick up your idea to work on the first tree again.
                      Do you know the work of Mary Blair? I am going back and forth through her pieces and try to find the secret how she got so much emotion with her super stylized trees. She was the best...
                      Thanks again for checking in. 🙂

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                      • DanetteDraws
                        DanetteDraws @Jana last edited by

                        @Jana You're welcome!

                        I just looked at some of Mary Blair's work on Google images - I think you've started on the right path. She's got really striking bold flat shapes. But then the difference is, she keeps the outline of the shape flat but then fills it with texture that adds interest and dimension. I think the juxtaposition of the flat shape with the added subtle texture makes it quite sophisticated. You might try taking natural texture images (ones you've made/scanned in yourself, or start with ones that someone else made online that are free/for a nominal charge) then applying them to your tree 'shapes' in Photoshop with different blending modes.

                        https://danettebyatt.com
                        Twitter @DanetteDraws
                        Instagram @DanetteDraws

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                        • Jana
                          Jana last edited by

                          How about this? To emphasize the paper cut style, I deleted the line art. To add more interest to the big green areas, I added some more tecture.
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                          • DanetteDraws
                            DanetteDraws @Jana last edited by

                            @Jana I like it! One thing I would do though is apply the texture to each "shape" or "cut paper piece" rather than the whole foliage area as a whole. It would look more realistic. Right now the back part of the tree at the top has the texture running down and directly into the front bottom part of the green. The texture should be offset so that each "piece" looks like a different cut piece of paper.

                            https://danettebyatt.com
                            Twitter @DanetteDraws
                            Instagram @DanetteDraws

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                            • Jana
                              Jana last edited by

                              @DanetteDraws You are totally right. I will try that out. Thanks! 🙂

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                              • Mara
                                Mara @Jana last edited by

                                @Jana I like them all. My favorite is number three. Looks like a queen with a royal and elegant attitude.

                                Mara

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                                • Jana
                                  Jana last edited by

                                  @DanetteDraws Hi, Danette! I followed your advice and treated the different levels as separate papers. I also lightened up the front part a tiny bit. I think it got a more stapled character now.
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                                    ShereeNorthrup last edited by

                                    I Love your bold graphic shapes. The texture that you added to your tree really helped. It gave your design a lot of charm. I also agree that Mary is the best 🙂

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                                    • Jana
                                      Jana last edited by

                                      @ShereeNorthrup Thanks, Sheree. 🙂
                                      I just finished another variation of one of my trees. I guess I need to vary the texture a bit more. Looks to me a bit too evenly textured. What do you guys think?
                                      I am eager now to produce my own watercolor texture. That way I can fabricate the texture which would fit best. So far, I have used free textures which I found online. 0_1483728457786_Baum 005 C SVS.png

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                                      • Judy Elizabeth Wilson
                                        Judy Elizabeth Wilson SVS OG last edited by

                                        This is a fabulous idea. You are going to have a great collection when you are finished Jana!

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                                        Sharing positivity through art.

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                                          ShereeNorthrup @Jana last edited by

                                          @Jana more variation in the texture would add a lot. I think that your own watercolor texture is a wonderful idea.

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                                          • Jana
                                            Jana last edited by

                                            Here comes tree number five. For my fairy tale project I need an apple tree meadow, so I am trying some more apple trees.
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