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    • Tyson Ranes
      Tyson Ranes @evilrobot last edited by

      @evilrobot awesome work

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      • Jon Anderson
        Jon Anderson SVS OG last edited by

        This is looking great! It may just be me, but the tile lines on the floor seem a bit off. They work well with the boy but feel off when looking at the popcorn stand and the shelves behind the boy. I like the direction and look forward to seeing more!

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        • evilrobot
          evilrobot SVS OG last edited by

          Think I'm calling it finished now 0_1495093687943_50-things-finished.jpg

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          • NoWayMe
            NoWayMe @evilrobot last edited by

            @evilrobot Very good work!!! I think you nailed it! The only thing that is bugging me is what @Sarah-LuAnn pointed out... I think you are loosing a lot of storytelling by just having the guy standing there. Maybe he could be looking at his watch, exasperated that the boy is taking so long to decide what he wants ? Otherwise, great work!

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            • aska
              aska last edited by

              Sweet:-) I feel like eating some candy now 😉

              Aska
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              • Jeanne.M.Bowman
                Jeanne.M.Bowman last edited by

                All I have to say is that this is A M A Z I N G. Such great work!

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                • Jake Parker
                  Jake Parker SVS OG last edited by

                  Solid work! @Will-Terry should be proud.

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                  • Kevin Longueil
                    Kevin Longueil SVS OG @evilrobot last edited by

                    @evilrobot Really nice work William!!

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                    • Randy Smith
                      Randy Smith last edited by

                      Really nice work. I love how you placed the main character in a pool of light. Good job!

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                      • Eric Castleman
                        Eric Castleman @evilrobot last edited by

                        @evilrobot this is really good!!! High level skill 😉

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                        • Lee White
                          Lee White SVS Team SVS Instructor Pro SVS OG last edited by

                          great looking scene here. Good looking line work and detail. One thing though, your 3rd vanishing point lines are all over the place. Make sure that 3rd point is far away and make sure everything goes to that point. Right now everything is drawn so well that the angles on that are really throwing it off.

                          Can't wait to see this finished! 0_1495214404019_1488663012060-50-things_-wip-3.jpg

                          SVS Faculty Instructor
                          www.leewhiteillustration.com

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