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    • will-terry-art
      will-terry-art @Tyson Ranes last edited by

      Wow - thanks for the submissions - greatly appreciated - I'll probably critique this weekend. I edited my original post - something I forgot to ask - can you guys please edit your posts and tell me what your concept was? Thank you!

      Will Terry

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      • MOO
        MOO SVS OG @will-terry-art last edited by MOO

        @will-terry-art I don't mean to be stupid but...I don't really know how to answer that question. What was my concept? I might have alerady stated it on mine. Thanks.

        Marsha Ottum Owen

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        • Tyson Ranes
          Tyson Ranes @MOO last edited by

          @Marsha-Kay-Ottum-Owen I kinda wasn't sure either so I winged it. Woo-hoo!!!

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          • Tyson Ranes
            Tyson Ranes @will-terry-art last edited by

            @will-terry-art Just edited. Thanks again Will! Now I have to go to bed I have a 1.5 year old and its 1:30 in the morning in East Texas.

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            • audrey dowling
              audrey dowling last edited by

              what a wonderful idea! thank you @Will-Terry
              I'm finishing a piece now and will definitely post it here when I'm done 🙂

              website: https://audreydowling.wordpress.com/
              twitter: https://twitter.com/audreydowling
              facebook: https://www.facebook.com/Audrey-Dowling-Artist-Illustrator-498582176906242/timeline/?ref=bookmarks

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              • markoman
                markoman last edited by

                Hey @will-terry-art , I tried with this illustration to do draw 50 things. It's a about little girl fear of her sick mother, and creating this world and characters around her to understand what is happening. Hope it's clear 🙂 My website is http://markomancic.weebly.com/ Thank you!

                0_1489055376129_1486934279828-auntsvs.jpg

                https://markomancic.weebly.com/
                https://www.facebook.com/marko.mancic.9
                https://www.instagram.com/markomancic11/

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                • mag
                  mag Pro SVS OG last edited by

                  Hi @will-terry-art and thanks so much for this possibility!
                  This is an illustration I've done for a client (the book is already finished and soon will in print) still - I'm not 100% happy with how it looks. And I do not know why. It's a double spread for Alice in Wonderland picture book.
                  My website: www.mag.takac.name
                  Thank you!!
                  0_1489058726160_Alice_preview.jpg

                  Mag
                  https://www.instagram.com/mag_takac/
                  http://mag.takac.name

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                  • lmrush
                    lmrush Pro SVS OG last edited by lmrush

                    What an awesome opportunity- I would love your opinion/a critique on this. Thanks Will- Concept Alice in wonderland

                    0_1489067380401_Alicewatercolorsvswill.jpg ![0_1489067190852_Alicewatercolorsvs.jpg](Uploading 100%)

                    Lisa Rush
                    www.lisarushgallery.com
                    www.facebook.com/ArtbyLisaRush/
                    www.instagram.com/lisarush11/

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                    • Joy Heyer
                      Joy Heyer last edited by

                      @Sarah-LuAnn Thanks! Honestly, I'll take any feedback! After you look at your own work long enough you either see only the bad or only the good so it helps to get another's insight. Having the objects break the border of the vignette is a great one!

                      Twitter: @Joy_Illustrated
                      Instagram: joy_illustrated
                      Website: joyheyer.com

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                      • lmrush
                        lmrush Pro SVS OG @Joy Heyer last edited by

                        @Joy-Heyer I just love your style❤

                        Lisa Rush
                        www.lisarushgallery.com
                        www.facebook.com/ArtbyLisaRush/
                        www.instagram.com/lisarush11/

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                        • Tyson Ranes
                          Tyson Ranes @mag last edited by

                          @mag did you scan this image from pencil then photoshop? I really like this look and want to try to tighten up my stuff! Cool style

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                          • mag
                            mag Pro SVS OG @Tyson Ranes last edited by

                            @Tyson thank you! It's all done in photoshop, the sketch, rendering, everything. I used a pencil-like brush (with a little help from SVS tutorial on photoshop pencil brushes) and draw with it like I would if I was drawing it with actual pencils. It's a tedious work, but it still saves me a lot of time (unlike the real pencils and paper)

                            Mag
                            https://www.instagram.com/mag_takac/
                            http://mag.takac.name

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                            • seelliott
                              seelliott last edited by

                              Hi
                              I would love some feedback on my draw50things piece. I originally designed Becky (a spaceship pilot) and her dog so thought it would be fun to explore what type of world she would live in. I have plans to develop this world further by designing the ship and the rest of the crew.
                              My website is www.seelliottcreations.co.uk

                              0_1489081489960_50objectshalfcontrastcolour_small.jpg

                              Website: http://www.seelliottcreations.com/
                              Facebook: https://www.facebook.com/SEElliottCreations/

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                              • Denise
                                Denise @will-terry-art last edited by

                                @will-terry-art
                                Hi Will,
                                I love your idea of critiques on your YouTube channel!
                                Here is an image based on a nursery rhyme:

                                (http://www.denisetonner.com/images/denise-tonner-whither-so-high)0_1489083813386_whither_so_high_small.jpg
                                If you use it, a credit and link would be fine.
                                In my illustration the kids get to go up in the basket.
                                The image was etched in copper and hand coloured with watercolour.

                                There was an old woman tossed up in a basket
                                Nineteen times as high as the moon;
                                Where she was going I couldn't but ask it,
                                For in her hand she carried a broom.

                                "Old woman, old woman, old woman," quoth I,
                                "O whither, O whither, O whither, so high?"
                                "To brush the cobwebs off the sky!"
                                "Shall I go with thee?" "Aye, by and by."

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                                • Tyson Ranes
                                  Tyson Ranes @mag last edited by

                                  @mag Awesome thank you! I have CS3 Photoshop and a Wacom tablet just got them up and working so I only have 2 rendered Photoshop pieces one is on this post "Pickles the Pig" (Pig in an apron in his workshop doorway) and the other is another Post I did on here unfinished > http://forum.svslearn.com/topic/3015/raven-his-writing-desk-work-in-progress

                                  I want to get a new Photoshop but (this might sound ridiculous) but I dont understand which one is the normal one to purchase they seem to have this monthly subscription purchase thing??????? What is that? am not familiar with the brushes in Photoshop and once I get the updated version Im on it! Im in a big discovery phase right now and am chomping at the bit like a horse on crack cocaine except Im a dad on coffee. With my work I don't like messy (which i do messy), thats one of the many elements that appeals to with your style and thats one of the things I need more comprehension and work in. Thank you for the reply! What Photoshop do you use? Is it pay monthly?

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                                  • will-terry-art
                                    will-terry-art last edited by

                                    Hey guys,

                                    I just finished recording the first set of crits for my channel - thank you and I'll be coming back here for my next round! I'll probably post the video early next week! Thank you!

                                    Will Terry

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                                    • Leontine
                                      Leontine last edited by

                                      Oww, thats so cool Will! I would like to ad an new illustration I've made its for a book for children with a autoimmune disease. The story is about a boy and a girl who learn to get to know each other as they have to stay in the hospital for a wile. 0_1489137850575_Leontine illustrator.png

                                      Leontine
                                      "A picture is worth a thousand words."

                                      https://leontineillustrator.com
                                      https://www.instagram.com/leontine.illustrator/
                                      http://www.facebook.com/leontineillustration

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                                      • Joy Heyer
                                        Joy Heyer @lmrush last edited by

                                        @lmrush Thank you so much. I love your style too! You capture young innocence perfectly!

                                        Twitter: @Joy_Illustrated
                                        Instagram: joy_illustrated
                                        Website: joyheyer.com

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                                        • Perrij
                                          Perrij last edited by Perrij

                                          Oh no! I hope I'm not too late. I would just love it if you'd consider either of these? (And credit would just be great, thank you so much ❤ my website is n0ireclipse.myportfolio.com Edit: oops. And my name is Jessica Perri. )
                                          The first image is surrounding the theme of "victory" in which the king of the land has finally gained dominance over the dragons and his knights are celebrating with him.
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                                          The second is more of an exciting piece in which a girl went out into the sea during a bad storm and her friend goes out to retrieve her.
                                          0_1489358047014_ocean.png

                                          https://perrijs.myportfolio.com/

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                                          • will-terry-art
                                            will-terry-art @Perrij last edited by

                                            @Perrij you're not late - I'm going to keep pulling from this thread for months - I finished the first video but there will be more in the future! Thank you!

                                            Will Terry

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