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    • audrey dowling
      audrey dowling last edited by

      what a wonderful idea! thank you @Will-Terry
      I'm finishing a piece now and will definitely post it here when I'm done 🙂

      website: https://audreydowling.wordpress.com/
      twitter: https://twitter.com/audreydowling
      facebook: https://www.facebook.com/Audrey-Dowling-Artist-Illustrator-498582176906242/timeline/?ref=bookmarks

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      • markoman
        markoman last edited by

        Hey @will-terry-art , I tried with this illustration to do draw 50 things. It's a about little girl fear of her sick mother, and creating this world and characters around her to understand what is happening. Hope it's clear 🙂 My website is http://markomancic.weebly.com/ Thank you!

        0_1489055376129_1486934279828-auntsvs.jpg

        https://markomancic.weebly.com/
        https://www.facebook.com/marko.mancic.9
        https://www.instagram.com/markomancic11/

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        • mag
          mag Pro SVS OG last edited by

          Hi @will-terry-art and thanks so much for this possibility!
          This is an illustration I've done for a client (the book is already finished and soon will in print) still - I'm not 100% happy with how it looks. And I do not know why. It's a double spread for Alice in Wonderland picture book.
          My website: www.mag.takac.name
          Thank you!!
          0_1489058726160_Alice_preview.jpg

          Mag
          https://www.instagram.com/mag_takac/
          http://mag.takac.name

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          • lmrush
            lmrush Pro SVS OG last edited by lmrush

            What an awesome opportunity- I would love your opinion/a critique on this. Thanks Will- Concept Alice in wonderland

            0_1489067380401_Alicewatercolorsvswill.jpg ![0_1489067190852_Alicewatercolorsvs.jpg](Uploading 100%)

            Lisa Rush
            www.lisarushgallery.com
            www.facebook.com/ArtbyLisaRush/
            www.instagram.com/lisarush11/

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            • Joy Heyer
              Joy Heyer last edited by

              @Sarah-LuAnn Thanks! Honestly, I'll take any feedback! After you look at your own work long enough you either see only the bad or only the good so it helps to get another's insight. Having the objects break the border of the vignette is a great one!

              Twitter: @Joy_Illustrated
              Instagram: joy_illustrated
              Website: joyheyer.com

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              • lmrush
                lmrush Pro SVS OG @Joy Heyer last edited by

                @Joy-Heyer I just love your style❤

                Lisa Rush
                www.lisarushgallery.com
                www.facebook.com/ArtbyLisaRush/
                www.instagram.com/lisarush11/

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                • Tyson Ranes
                  Tyson Ranes @mag last edited by

                  @mag did you scan this image from pencil then photoshop? I really like this look and want to try to tighten up my stuff! Cool style

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                  • mag
                    mag Pro SVS OG @Tyson Ranes last edited by

                    @Tyson thank you! It's all done in photoshop, the sketch, rendering, everything. I used a pencil-like brush (with a little help from SVS tutorial on photoshop pencil brushes) and draw with it like I would if I was drawing it with actual pencils. It's a tedious work, but it still saves me a lot of time (unlike the real pencils and paper)

                    Mag
                    https://www.instagram.com/mag_takac/
                    http://mag.takac.name

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                    • seelliott
                      seelliott last edited by

                      Hi
                      I would love some feedback on my draw50things piece. I originally designed Becky (a spaceship pilot) and her dog so thought it would be fun to explore what type of world she would live in. I have plans to develop this world further by designing the ship and the rest of the crew.
                      My website is www.seelliottcreations.co.uk

                      0_1489081489960_50objectshalfcontrastcolour_small.jpg

                      Website: http://www.seelliottcreations.com/
                      Facebook: https://www.facebook.com/SEElliottCreations/

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                      • Denise
                        Denise @will-terry-art last edited by

                        @will-terry-art
                        Hi Will,
                        I love your idea of critiques on your YouTube channel!
                        Here is an image based on a nursery rhyme:

                        (http://www.denisetonner.com/images/denise-tonner-whither-so-high)0_1489083813386_whither_so_high_small.jpg
                        If you use it, a credit and link would be fine.
                        In my illustration the kids get to go up in the basket.
                        The image was etched in copper and hand coloured with watercolour.

                        There was an old woman tossed up in a basket
                        Nineteen times as high as the moon;
                        Where she was going I couldn't but ask it,
                        For in her hand she carried a broom.

                        "Old woman, old woman, old woman," quoth I,
                        "O whither, O whither, O whither, so high?"
                        "To brush the cobwebs off the sky!"
                        "Shall I go with thee?" "Aye, by and by."

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                        • Tyson Ranes
                          Tyson Ranes @mag last edited by

                          @mag Awesome thank you! I have CS3 Photoshop and a Wacom tablet just got them up and working so I only have 2 rendered Photoshop pieces one is on this post "Pickles the Pig" (Pig in an apron in his workshop doorway) and the other is another Post I did on here unfinished > http://forum.svslearn.com/topic/3015/raven-his-writing-desk-work-in-progress

                          I want to get a new Photoshop but (this might sound ridiculous) but I dont understand which one is the normal one to purchase they seem to have this monthly subscription purchase thing??????? What is that? am not familiar with the brushes in Photoshop and once I get the updated version Im on it! Im in a big discovery phase right now and am chomping at the bit like a horse on crack cocaine except Im a dad on coffee. With my work I don't like messy (which i do messy), thats one of the many elements that appeals to with your style and thats one of the things I need more comprehension and work in. Thank you for the reply! What Photoshop do you use? Is it pay monthly?

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                          • will-terry-art
                            will-terry-art last edited by

                            Hey guys,

                            I just finished recording the first set of crits for my channel - thank you and I'll be coming back here for my next round! I'll probably post the video early next week! Thank you!

                            Will Terry

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                            • Leontine
                              Leontine last edited by

                              Oww, thats so cool Will! I would like to ad an new illustration I've made its for a book for children with a autoimmune disease. The story is about a boy and a girl who learn to get to know each other as they have to stay in the hospital for a wile. 0_1489137850575_Leontine illustrator.png

                              Leontine
                              "A picture is worth a thousand words."

                              https://leontineillustrator.com
                              https://www.instagram.com/leontine.illustrator/
                              http://www.facebook.com/leontineillustration

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                              • Joy Heyer
                                Joy Heyer @lmrush last edited by

                                @lmrush Thank you so much. I love your style too! You capture young innocence perfectly!

                                Twitter: @Joy_Illustrated
                                Instagram: joy_illustrated
                                Website: joyheyer.com

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                                • Perrij
                                  Perrij last edited by Perrij

                                  Oh no! I hope I'm not too late. I would just love it if you'd consider either of these? (And credit would just be great, thank you so much ❤ my website is n0ireclipse.myportfolio.com Edit: oops. And my name is Jessica Perri. )
                                  The first image is surrounding the theme of "victory" in which the king of the land has finally gained dominance over the dragons and his knights are celebrating with him.
                                  alt text
                                  The second is more of an exciting piece in which a girl went out into the sea during a bad storm and her friend goes out to retrieve her.
                                  0_1489358047014_ocean.png

                                  https://perrijs.myportfolio.com/

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                                  • will-terry-art
                                    will-terry-art @Perrij last edited by

                                    @Perrij you're not late - I'm going to keep pulling from this thread for months - I finished the first video but there will be more in the future! Thank you!

                                    Will Terry

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                                    • Jodi Gregg
                                      Jodi Gregg last edited by Jodi Gregg

                                      How Awesome! What a great idea! I've been dying for some feedback! Would love to hear your critiques!

                                      This is from the one of the 3rd Thursday (I think the last one where we submitted works), This is Thomas the Space Fireman saving an alien cat from an asteroid:

                                      0_1489366051732_Jodi_Gregg.jpg

                                      You can also pull from my Design 100 Space Explorers thread if you want: http://forum.svslearn.com/topic/2722/design-100-space-explorers

                                      I'm so looking forward to these! I always get so much out of watching the critique SVS videos no matter whose work we are looking at 🙂

                                      • Jodi Gregg aka Girl Gregg Arts
                                        https://www.girlgreggarts.com/

                                      www.girlgreggarts.com
                                      http://girlgregg.tumblr.com/

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                                      • Beth Snider
                                        Beth Snider last edited by

                                        0_1489425564909_Coffee Truck_Resized_BethSnider.jpg

                                        My website is BethSniderArt.com or on Instagram @beth.snider.artist
                                        The concept behind this piece is just a quirky coffee truck serving coffee.
                                        I wonder if the scene would do better in a city setting showing building behind.
                                        (Also, I realize the white cat blends in with the snow in the background.)

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                                        • dimablue
                                          dimablue last edited by dimablue

                                          This is a 4 years progress, time in which I watched every tutorial that I could find or afford. Will Terry's influence is obvious.
                                          At this time I feel like this is the strongest piece in my portfolio so it will be a bit heart breaking to see the holes in it but also very very helpful. Thank you for your time and consideration!
                                          My website is www.StoryBookIllustrator.com

                                          0_1489429232190_pumpkinprogress.jpg

                                          Large resolution of the image here: http://www.storybookillustrator.com/uploads/5/7/9/6/5796694/pumpkin173.jpg

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                                          • will-terry-art
                                            will-terry-art last edited by

                                            Hey guys - here's the first critique video - more to come! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Mmx2GgV7x1c&t=671s

                                            Will Terry

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