WIP Hansel & Gretel

Doha

I have been working on this illustration in my free time.
I would love to hear your notes and critiques.

smceccarelli

I love the composition and colors, the energy of the candies in the air and the choice of viewpoint. If I had to raise a concern would be with the faces - they are a touch too much chibi/manga style. Maybe trying a different way to draw the eyes?

Doha

@smceccarelli You are right I didn't notice that before. I was aiming for big eyes, like Lorena Alvarez Gomez, I love her work. I'll try another approach. Thanks a lot for your feedback.

Carrie

I agree about the faces. This is such a great perspective! I really like your composition.