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    • smceccarelli
      smceccarelli Pro SVS OG @Rich Green last edited by

      @Rich-Green Yes. Good points. Maybe I should turn him around? At this point I am more using it as a rendering exercise and experimenting with process. Which I am not sure it's working anyhow....Maybe I should start a new one...Here is the WIP for today.

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      • mattramsey
        mattramsey @smceccarelli last edited by

        @smceccarelli I don't know if you just aren't at the stage where you have gotten to rendering the boards but I think I'm really liking the juxtaposition of the rendered kids/rocks/trees and the more cartoony/flat boards.

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        • smceccarelli
          smceccarelli Pro SVS OG last edited by

          Ok - was an interesting rendering exercise. I could noodle it forever but the storytelling is not very strong and this rendering process is not my favourite. But, I definitely learnt a lot and I like the lighting - it is the first time I am halfway happy with dappled light. Some things I learnt: the edge of the light needs to be slightly blurry and slightly more saturated. I will probably try it again sometime.
          And I may do another one for the "treehouse" topic...if I find the time!

          0_1497039141756_Treehouse_FINAL.jpg

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          • Eric Castleman
            Eric Castleman @smceccarelli last edited by

            @smceccarelli This is incredible........now I must go an cry in the corner 😉

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            • Charlie Eve Ryan
              Charlie Eve Ryan Pro SVS OG @smceccarelli last edited by

              @smceccarelli i love it!

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              • Kevin Longueil
                Kevin Longueil SVS OG @smceccarelli last edited by

                @smceccarelli Lighting is so well done!!

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                • TessaW
                  TessaW last edited by

                  Beautiful!

                  My one suggestion would be to tone down his nipples a bit.

                  This really is a stunning piece! Very inspirational- makes me want to do some art.

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                  • holleywilliamson
                    holleywilliamson SVS OG @smceccarelli last edited by

                    @smceccarelli this looks beautiful! What about about a shadow under the zip lining boy? That might make him pop a little more

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                    • smceccarelli
                      smceccarelli Pro SVS OG last edited by

                      @Eric-Castleman that is how I feel at least once a day, especially when I see beautifully designed, simple and charming styles like yours 😉
                      @Kevin-Longueil I have been studying Szymon Biernacki obsessively for this piece - he has some time-lapse videos and some gifs out there, and I have been pausing at every frame to study his layer structure and his process. I have learnt some things, some still elude me (I could not reproduce his brushes, no matter how much I tweak settings). But the one thing I learnt from him is style independent: apparently you can do whatever you want with your brushwork - if you nail the value structure and the color relations, it will look realistic. Some of his pieces are extremely stylized if you look up close - nothing more than designed shapes. His bushes and trees are practically abstract design. But because he has such a masterful control of value and color, it looks like a real landscape. Also, he uses texture to suggest volume, while reducing value-based volume rendering to a minimum. It was a really interesting study for me, as I am struggling to simplify my style without loosing personality.

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                      • smceccarelli
                        smceccarelli Pro SVS OG @holleywilliamson last edited by

                        @holleywilliamson Good idea! I will try that - or a reflection!

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                        • MirkaH
                          MirkaH last edited by

                          Love it! Id turn the boy on the bottom around too. would look more natural. going to check out that guy you mentioned. love the way this is rendered. I just started practicing with Adobe sketch on iPad, and its a trip uphill, but figuring it out.

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                          • NoWayMe
                            NoWayMe last edited by

                            Love it! Awesome composition! 🙂

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