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    Worst Fear WIP - Death Star Mini-me - loss of father

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    • Dennis Spaans
      Dennis Spaans last edited by Dennis Spaans

      One of the worst fears I had as a kid was losing one or both parents. I guess everyone has that same fear, so I thought of drawing something like that. But the topic was too heavy, so I lighten it up, and made a cartoon of it. The first hour was spent searching if @Jake-Parker hadnt already drawn a Death Star robot, so I wouldn't copy, but it turns out he didnt! (wow!) (or I havent found it yet :P). Hope you like it. I am thinking of adding an explosion (of the deathstar) as a reflect on its body, and more colors have yet to be added. Suggestions and comments are always welcome!

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      Dennis Spaans
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      • Chip Valecek
        Chip Valecek SVS Team SVS OG @Dennis Spaans last edited by

        @dennis-spaans I don't think he has ever done a death star robot. Curious as to what your robot is holding in his hand?


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        • Dennis Spaans
          Dennis Spaans @Chip Valecek last edited by

          @chip-valecek a playball 😃

          Dennis Spaans
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          • Chip Valecek
            Chip Valecek SVS Team SVS OG @Dennis Spaans last edited by

            @dennis-spaans looks soft and squishy to me, didn't read as a ball to me. Maybe make it more round? Unless you wanted it squishy looking.


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            • Dennis Spaans
              Dennis Spaans @Chip Valecek last edited by

              @chip-valecek good tip, ill work on that.

              Dennis Spaans
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              • Katrina Fowler
                Katrina Fowler last edited by

                Yeah object in it's hand looks like a mushroom or a strawberry. Not reading as no daddy to play with. Interesting concept. Who would be the Death Star's Daddy? Who built it? Or is this just a small copy of the real Death Star? Needs to be more clear somehow.

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                • TessaW
                  TessaW last edited by TessaW

                  Soooo funny! Who would have thought that I would ever feel sorry for a baby death star. . .

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                  • Dennis Spaans
                    Dennis Spaans @TessaW last edited by

                    @tessw haha thanks! My wife said it was too sad, even when I said it's a child of a planet destroying weapon... lol

                    Dennis Spaans
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                    • MOO
                      MOO SVS OG @Dennis Spaans last edited by

                      @dennis-spaans I don't see the image!

                      Marsha Ottum Owen

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                      • Dennis Spaans
                        Dennis Spaans @MOO last edited by

                        @marsha-kay-ottum-owen it is in the first post. Sometimes it takes a little while to load it, but its there :).

                        Dennis Spaans
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                        Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/dscomicsnl/

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                        • MOO
                          MOO SVS OG @Dennis Spaans last edited by

                          @dennis-spaans Okay, saw it 🙂 It makes me sad too 🙂 I agree the ball should be rounder. I look forward to seeing the colors and reflection you choose to do.

                          Marsha Ottum Owen

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