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    • tombarrettillo
      tombarrettillo last edited by

      The only adjustment I would make would be to develop more contrast between your character and the background. She gets lost since her attire is near the same grays as the background. Adding a few bees flying around would add a bit more interest. Otherwise I think it is great!

      https://www.youtube.com/@tombarrettart

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      • bnewman
        bnewman last edited by

        This makes me happy. I think @tombarrettillo is spot on. A bit more contrast and or color in the beekeepers outfit would make it pop although the color scheme is very pleasing as is. Bees flying about definitely. Some wildflowers for accent? Just tossing things out here, they may make things worse! The only thing that bothers me is the angle of her forward foot. It looks a tad too bendy! This is really, really lovely. Is this digital?

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        • Pamela Fraley
          Pamela Fraley SVS OG last edited by

          Very cute! I love the colors and the whole idea. I also think her front foot is bent a little up, but other than that, it's adorable.

          instagram.com/fraleycreates

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          • Will Terry
            Will Terry @stringfellowart last edited by

            @stringfellowart I took the liberty of drawing over your art - which is very cute by the way! Love the style!

            I think Tom hit it on the head with the value background/foreground relationship. I went both darker and lighter...I hope this helps a little.

            Cheers,
            Will0_1502379776599_3567567567.jpg

            SVS Instructor
            http://willterry.com/

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            • stringfellowart
              stringfellowart SVS OG last edited by

              @Will-Terry @tombarrettillo @bnewman @Pamela-Fraley Thanks guys! I'm going to do some tweaking and come back.

              Bringing whimsical creatures to life.
              www.stringfellowart.com
              www.instagram/stringfellowart

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              • NoWayMe
                NoWayMe last edited by

                Very cute piece - Awesome style!

                I really like the modification @Will-Terry made with the dark background. Great work!

                noemiegionetlandry.squarespace.com
                noemie_illustration on Instagram

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                • stringfellowart
                  stringfellowart SVS OG last edited by

                  0_1502602027077_garden girl updated resized.jpg
                  I made some changes based on everyone's feed back.

                  Bringing whimsical creatures to life.
                  www.stringfellowart.com
                  www.instagram/stringfellowart

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                  • MOO
                    MOO SVS OG @tombarrettillo last edited by

                    @tombarrettillo I agree with Tom. 🙂

                    Marsha Ottum Owen

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                    • MOO
                      MOO SVS OG @stringfellowart last edited by

                      @stringfellowart Looks good!

                      Marsha Ottum Owen

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                      • tombarrettillo
                        tombarrettillo last edited by

                        this looks much better. and the dark background really helps define the lighting. nice work.

                        https://www.youtube.com/@tombarrettart

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