Worst Fear WIP
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You mean, only kids are supposed to feel this way? Whoa, I didn't get the memo. Anyway, great concept! What if you made her shadow longer, too, because the light is way up at the top of the stairs. And maybe boxes and junk stored in the basement. Those odds and ends always add lots of creepy shadows.
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@rhirsch I would maybe make it even darker around the rest of the basement besides for the light that is coming from the upstairs. Just have the shadows of the fingers peaking out near the stairs and maybe just the glow of the eyes vs having the full shadow.
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oh yeah!
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I was always afraid to go down to the basement....the furnace was always a shadowy monster for me.
I agree with Tess making the light bulb just with in reach would intensify the tension. Check out Jon Klassen's illustrations in the book The Dark to be inspired! -
@tessw Good point. The basement looks a little "safe" yet. I'll play with it.
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@chip-valecek I like the idea of glowing eyes. Hmm....the wheels are turning...
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@elaine-bruce My thought with the lightbulb was a "so near, but yet so far" sort of thing, but I'll try it closer and see if it ups the tension. Thanks.
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@chip-valecek I'm just concerned about it getting too dark, as I've been told too dark isn't good for children's picture books and I'd like to put this one in my portfolio for the SCBWI conference in a few weeks. But I'll play around with it, it ain't over until it's submitted to the Worst Fear thread.
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Made a few changes...still have to tweak some values I think, the box with the eyes blends a bit too much with the background, I think.
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@elaine-bruce I have to say, after looking at "The Dark", I'm not so worried about my piece not being light enough. He does an excellent job with it.
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I think maybe getting rid of the end of the bannister, I keep thinking she has one leg forward. The silhouette is not very clear. But maybe you could also lift one of the back legs--you can reach a bit farther with one leg on the ground, ya know? Also the shadow of the girl if it is right against the wall, would be partially on the wall too, I feel like part of it is missing. Anyways this is coming along great! Love the creepy eyes and darkness beneath the stairs.
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@holleywilliamson You're right, she needs some shadow on the wall. Thanks.
