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      orangeni last edited by

      I reworked one of my old illustrations where Tiger and two frogs chilling in the pond. Which one do you like better? 🙂

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      • Russ Van Dine
        Russ Van Dine last edited by

        I actually like them both. The second one is better for several reason, both are good and I think you could use either style for a children's book.

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          orangeni last edited by

          I think I coloured the right one wrong... Is it better now?

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          • Chip Valecek
            Chip Valecek SVS Team SVS OG last edited by

            I personally like the second one better. But both are different styles of the same concept which shows some great range in your style.


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              rcartwright @orangeni last edited by

              @orangeni Yes the frogs were originally a little hard to see but they stand out better now

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                DOTTYP last edited by

                I like the first one.

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                • Gary Wilkinson
                  Gary Wilkinson last edited by

                  Both are good and i'm sure they would appeal to different people and age groups. I would say that left one is more kidsy, due to the saturated colors and simple linework, whereas the right one is a bit more wider in it's audience (it reminds me a little of Quentin Blake)

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                    orangeni @Gary Wilkinson last edited by

                    @gary-wilkinson Thank you! I love him a lot 🙂

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                      MOO SVS OG @Russ Van Dine last edited by

                      @russ-van-dine I agree.

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                        MOO SVS OG @orangeni last edited by

                        @orangeni I agree with Russ. I must say though that I liek th ecolors on teh left oen better and wonder how teh right one would look with that color palette 🙂 I tend to like bright colors. But both are awesome compositions and could both woork for books.

                        Marsha Ottum Owen

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                          MOO SVS OG @orangeni last edited by

                          @orangeni Yes 🙂

                          Marsha Ottum Owen

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