Society of Visual Storytelling

    SVSLearn Forums

    • Register
    • Login
    • Search
    • Recent
    • Tags
    • Popular
    • Users
    • Groups
    • Search

    Toothfairy traveling through Norway, Feedback?

    General Discussion
    illustration photoshop texture ink fairytale
    4
    7
    2365
    Loading More Posts
    • Oldest to Newest
    • Newest to Oldest
    • Most Votes
    Reply
    • Reply as topic
    Log in to reply
    This topic has been deleted. Only users with topic management privileges can see it.
    • N
      Nille Horgen last edited by Nille Horgen

      I have just started with photoshop. And have fallen in love with using textures.
      Feel free to comment on anything from proportions to color. 😃
      I love constructive critisism.

      Love NIlle

      Skjermbilde 2015-08-23 19.23.44.png

      Love Nille

      1 Reply Last reply Reply Quote 3
      • Steve Young
        Steve Young last edited by

        Two begin with i love your line work and colors. Though I feel the fairies arms have become lost in the folds of her dress, and I think seeing her feet would help with the overall form. nice work.

        Never give up, always push yourself two steps further than you believe you can go.

        1 Reply Last reply Reply Quote 1
        • T
          thrace7724 last edited by

          Very cute! Where did you get the texture in her dress?

          1 Reply Last reply Reply Quote 1
          • N
            Nille Horgen last edited by

            Thrace : I got the texture from one of my dresses 😃 I like to capture textures as i go. 🙂
            Steve: Thank you so much, I havent seen that thing with the arms. Thanks!
            I will check how it will look like witht the feet. Thought she might not have feet, but her lower body just contains a ball with frost on it. But i will try with both.
            Thanks guys

            Love Nille

            1 Reply Last reply Reply Quote 0
            • Steve Young
              Steve Young last edited by

              Thanks, just enjoy the process.

              Never give up, always push yourself two steps further than you believe you can go.

              1 Reply Last reply Reply Quote 1
              • Carey Bowden
                Carey Bowden last edited by

                I love her design! Can't wait to see more from you!

                My critique: To me, it's a little hard to tell she's the toothfairy, I found the tooth on her dress at my second pass. If you want that subtlety, keep it! Otherwise, maybe add a few more 'hints" (for instance, how big is she? Could she be holding some coins that are plate-sized? Or her tooth bag could be a bit larger?)

                Really nice work, keep it up!

                https://twitter.com/careybowdenart?lang=en
                https://careybowdenart.weebly.com/

                1 Reply Last reply Reply Quote 2
                • N
                  Nille Horgen last edited by Nille Horgen

                  Ah! Thats very good Carey! Thanks ❤ I will keep up the good work, and defantly change that and post a update so you guys can see. Thank you all hadn`t thought of that.

                  love

                  Love Nille

                  1 Reply Last reply Reply Quote 0
                  • First post
                    Last post