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    • Jason Kilthau
      Jason Kilthau last edited by

      Hi All! As the title states, I wanted to make this thread for a project I am working on. I want to make pages for a coloring book I want to print sometime in a few months. I'm thinking around 20-30 pictures with a title image for each section/theme. And maybe 4-5 pages for each theme. Right now I'm working on Underwater and using some inktober pieces to get started.
      Suggestions, Critiques, and Cools are more than welcome!

      Jason Kilthau
      www.jaskil.com
      FB- https://www.facebook.com/JMKilthau/
      IG- @JMKilthau https://www.instagram.com/jmkilthau/

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      • Jason Kilthau
        Jason Kilthau last edited by

        Here is my first image so far, used the Anchor I drew from inktober. I am currently brainstorming what to put in the background to fill the whitespace without taking away from the anchor and its inside.
        alt text

        Jason Kilthau
        www.jaskil.com
        FB- https://www.facebook.com/JMKilthau/
        IG- @JMKilthau https://www.instagram.com/jmkilthau/

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        • tombarrettillo
          tombarrettillo last edited by

          I like the anchor. Maybe put a couple seagulls on the eye of the anchor to fill that space.

          Will this be a coloring book for adults or children? I ask because there is quite a bit of small details that may be difficult for younger children to color. Could be a non-issue, but just my thinking. Maybe I should ask my teacher wife. : )

          https://www.youtube.com/@tombarrettart

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          • Jason Kilthau
            Jason Kilthau @tombarrettillo last edited by

            @tombarrettillo Thanks! I wish I checked back earlier but I have been busy with OT at work. The seagulls would have been a cool addition. I will have to keep it in mind when I finish all my pages and go back through for any final edits!

            I don't plan to have anything to graphic so it could be for children as well. But my initial audience mindset is more young adult/adult .I want to have it ready for print by February but ultimately it needs to be good to go by September and with me physically, because I got a booth at our Portland Comic Con. Which is my first one and I'm pretty excited.

            Here is the current "final" anchor.
            alt text

            Jason Kilthau
            www.jaskil.com
            FB- https://www.facebook.com/JMKilthau/
            IG- @JMKilthau https://www.instagram.com/jmkilthau/

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            • tombarrettillo
              tombarrettillo last edited by

              I mentioned the seagulls as I thought you were referring to the white space in the eye of the anchor, but I see now you mean the white of the page. I like the chain and the barnacles. Good luck at the Con

              https://www.youtube.com/@tombarrettart

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              • Jason Kilthau
                Jason Kilthau last edited by

                Next page I am working on with the underwater theme. The colors are to help discern certain layers to make it easier to erase when I draw through other parts of it, helps with the whole drawing flow.
                0_1514336600391_fishtank.jpg

                Jason Kilthau
                www.jaskil.com
                FB- https://www.facebook.com/JMKilthau/
                IG- @JMKilthau https://www.instagram.com/jmkilthau/

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                  A Former User @Jason Kilthau last edited by

                  @jason-kilthau Love the use of barnacle! I'm wondering if the inner link should have a lighter weight on the lines. They seem to distract as both inner liner and outer lines are thick.

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                  • Jason Kilthau
                    Jason Kilthau @Guest last edited by

                    @amphailin thanks! and thank you for the feedback, I am not sure if you're talking about just the links going over the center or a specific part of each link themselves. But I will make adjustments when I get back around to that page and see how it looks.

                    Jason Kilthau
                    www.jaskil.com
                    FB- https://www.facebook.com/JMKilthau/
                    IG- @JMKilthau https://www.instagram.com/jmkilthau/

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