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    • umutdulger
      umutdulger last edited by umutdulger

      In these days I'm trying to modify popular characters. This work is part of this activity.
      Paper: A3 150gr Watercolor
      Materials: Platinum Carbon Desk Fountain Pen and Platinum Brush Pen with Carbon Ink. Schminke Academia Watercolor, Uni-Ball Broad Gel Pen, Copic Opaque White Ink

      Count Batman is Raising...
      0_1515131827640_CountBatman.jpg

      Best Regards
      -Est sularus oth mithas-
      Umut DÜLGER
      https://www.instagram.com/magaraduvari/

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      • Gary Wilkinson
        Gary Wilkinson @umutdulger last edited by

        @umutdulger Well done on the finished piece and I hope you don't mind me critiquing, but it's hard to read the image as Batman rising up, as it seems more like the artist had an issue with Batman's anatomy. Perhaps if you had a load of bats at the bottom of the image that are forming Batman (as though he is growing from them) then it might read better.

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        • umutdulger
          umutdulger @Gary Wilkinson last edited by

          @gary-wilkinson I'm happy to read your critique. Thanks for sharing your time. You are totally right I'll be careful next time when I draw this kind of figure. Many thanks.

          Best Regards
          -Est sularus oth mithas-
          Umut DÜLGER
          https://www.instagram.com/magaraduvari/

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          • Eli
            Eli last edited by

            Love the concept, the feel of the piece and the colors!

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