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    Critiques for a Facebook LIVE in February

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    • carriecopadraws
      carriecopadraws SVS OG last edited by

      Here's mine if you need another entry! I'm happy with it but I know it could be better. I'm worried I over-rendered it. A fresh perspective would help.

      0_1516222033035_triple-dog-dare-finished-tall.jpg

      Carrie Copa
      https://carriecopadraws.com/

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        Dian last edited by

        Again, thank you Will! 🙂 0_1516274975138_dieren op fiets_dian.jpg

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          kerilynnwilson last edited by kerilynnwilson

          @Will-Terry
          Hi all! Im new here, I thought I would give it a shot and submit something from a project I'm working on. Any advice if you use this in your critique would be wonderful!
          0_1516302045289_Untitled-3.jpg

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          • audrey dowling
            audrey dowling @Will Terry last edited by

            @will-terry thank you Will! I appreciate it 🙂

            website: https://audreydowling.wordpress.com/
            twitter: https://twitter.com/audreydowling
            facebook: https://www.facebook.com/Audrey-Dowling-Artist-Illustrator-498582176906242/timeline/?ref=bookmarks

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            • beckporter
              beckporter last edited by

              I would love some critique if either of these fit with what you're looking for. Can't put my finger on what it is that keeps me from feeling finished with them. ![0_1516393869031_whisperandpoint.jpg](Uploading 100%) 0_1516394051471_cocoaforsanta.jpg

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              • beckporter
                beckporter last edited by

                Oops. Second time's a charm? 🙂
                0_1516394876444_whisperandpointsmall.jpg

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                • Nyrryl  Cadiz
                  Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG @EunJi Jung last edited by

                  @eunji-jung I love your style!!!

                  Portfolio: nyrrylcadiz.com
                  Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/nyrryl_cadiz/
                  YouTube: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCbJCF1Im8ZO7hpGWTKOJMuA

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                  • beckporter
                    beckporter @kerilynnwilson last edited by

                    @kerilynnwilson this is beautiful! Compelling and ethereal. I took a peak at your website and I love your Thicket series. 🙂

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                    • EunJi Jung
                      EunJi Jung @Nyrryl Cadiz last edited by

                      @nyrryl-cadiz Thank you 😃

                      Eunji Jung

                      Illustrator | Designer
                      eunjijung.com
                      instagram.com/foodiecherrypie

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                        kerilynnwilson @beckporter last edited by

                        @beckporter Thank you so much!! You are so kind 🙂 This is a page from a wordless picture book I'm working on. I really appreciate the feedback 🙂

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                          Alex Diaz last edited by

                          Hi, I'm new in the forums. I made this piece after watching the Composition class, the How to Draw Everything class and some other classes. It's watercolor but I would love to have you critique this. I know there's so much to improve because frankly it's my first piece trying to actually express a story.
                          0_1516553569402_TheBestIsYetToCome.png

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                            Eli @Alex Diaz last edited by

                            @alex-diaz I love this! It's so fun and funny and joyful. Love the facial expressions. Nice work. This would be a great entry for the contest theme this month--"Fearless."

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                              Alex Diaz last edited by

                              @eli Thank you! I'll check the contest.

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                              • Boris Bayo
                                Boris Bayo last edited by

                                Hi Will!

                                I've been on SVS binge watching a lot of the classes and trying to apply the principles to my work. I would love to have some critiques for this one. Kind regards!!

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                                www.borisbayo.com
                                www.facebook.com/borisbayo/
                                www.instagram.com/boris_bayo/

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                                  MOO SVS OG last edited by

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                                  Marsha Ottum Owen

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                                    A Former User last edited by

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                                    Here's one that I put a lot of effort into, and got very disappointed by the result. I really don't like it, but have no idea where I went wrong 🙂

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                                      A Former User last edited by

                                      wip - character development idea for a story.. yeah they're gloves not badly drawn hands.. ![0_1516827367787_boy.jp2](Uploading 100%)

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                                        A Former User @Guest last edited by

                                        @annebrierley ![0_1516827406973_boy.jpg](Uploading 100%) oops - technical trouble..

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                                        • Chip Valecek
                                          Chip Valecek SVS Team SVS OG @Guest last edited by

                                          @annebrierley make sure when you are uploading an image, that the image is no larger than 1500px width. Also you will see the uploading text in the compose box, sometimes you need to wait a few seconds for the preview box to show the image. Once you see the image in the preview box then you can press submit. If you press submit to soon, it will not finish uploading the image and you will only have the text of the upload.


                                          https://www.instagram.com/chipvalecek/
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                                          http://www.cshellmedia.com/

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                                            A Former User @Chip Valecek last edited by

                                            @chip-valecek thankyou have altered size 🙂 0_1516829668325_boy2.jpg

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