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    Critiques for a Facebook LIVE in February

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    • beckporter
      beckporter last edited by

      I would love some critique if either of these fit with what you're looking for. Can't put my finger on what it is that keeps me from feeling finished with them. ![0_1516393869031_whisperandpoint.jpg](Uploading 100%) 0_1516394051471_cocoaforsanta.jpg

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      • beckporter
        beckporter last edited by

        Oops. Second time's a charm? 🙂
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        • Nyrryl  Cadiz
          Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG @EunJi Jung last edited by

          @eunji-jung I love your style!!!

          Portfolio: nyrrylcadiz.com
          Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/nyrryl_cadiz/
          YouTube: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCbJCF1Im8ZO7hpGWTKOJMuA

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          • beckporter
            beckporter @kerilynnwilson last edited by

            @kerilynnwilson this is beautiful! Compelling and ethereal. I took a peak at your website and I love your Thicket series. 🙂

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            • EunJi Jung
              EunJi Jung @Nyrryl Cadiz last edited by

              @nyrryl-cadiz Thank you 😃

              Eunji Jung

              Illustrator | Designer
              eunjijung.com
              instagram.com/foodiecherrypie

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                kerilynnwilson @beckporter last edited by

                @beckporter Thank you so much!! You are so kind 🙂 This is a page from a wordless picture book I'm working on. I really appreciate the feedback 🙂

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                  Alex Diaz last edited by

                  Hi, I'm new in the forums. I made this piece after watching the Composition class, the How to Draw Everything class and some other classes. It's watercolor but I would love to have you critique this. I know there's so much to improve because frankly it's my first piece trying to actually express a story.
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                  • Eli
                    Eli @Alex Diaz last edited by

                    @alex-diaz I love this! It's so fun and funny and joyful. Love the facial expressions. Nice work. This would be a great entry for the contest theme this month--"Fearless."

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                      Alex Diaz last edited by

                      @eli Thank you! I'll check the contest.

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                      • Boris Bayo
                        Boris Bayo last edited by

                        Hi Will!

                        I've been on SVS binge watching a lot of the classes and trying to apply the principles to my work. I would love to have some critiques for this one. Kind regards!!

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                        www.facebook.com/borisbayo/
                        www.instagram.com/boris_bayo/

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                        • MOO
                          MOO SVS OG last edited by

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                          Marsha Ottum Owen

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                            A Former User last edited by

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                            Here's one that I put a lot of effort into, and got very disappointed by the result. I really don't like it, but have no idea where I went wrong 🙂

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                              A Former User last edited by

                              wip - character development idea for a story.. yeah they're gloves not badly drawn hands.. ![0_1516827367787_boy.jp2](Uploading 100%)

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                                A Former User @Guest last edited by

                                @annebrierley ![0_1516827406973_boy.jpg](Uploading 100%) oops - technical trouble..

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                                • Chip Valecek
                                  Chip Valecek SVS Team SVS OG @Guest last edited by

                                  @annebrierley make sure when you are uploading an image, that the image is no larger than 1500px width. Also you will see the uploading text in the compose box, sometimes you need to wait a few seconds for the preview box to show the image. Once you see the image in the preview box then you can press submit. If you press submit to soon, it will not finish uploading the image and you will only have the text of the upload.


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                                    A Former User @Chip Valecek last edited by

                                    @chip-valecek thankyou have altered size 🙂 0_1516829668325_boy2.jpg

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                                    • Miriam
                                      Miriam @Chip Valecek last edited by

                                      @AnneBrierley
                                      FYI: You can also edit or delete your post by clicking on the 3 dots on the right underneath your post. (You can also bookmark or share your post on social media. If it's another person's post, you can bookmark, share, or flag the post.)

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                                        A Former User @Miriam last edited by

                                        @miriam thankyou! 🙂 i will get the hang of this hopefully !

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                                        • jae
                                          jae last edited by

                                          Thanks for this opportunity. Would welcome any feedback.0_1516886874915_Jae_witch.jpg

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                                          • Pam Boutilier
                                            Pam Boutilier last edited by

                                            I'd love to get some feedback on this one if it's useful to you - also, feel free to use my name.
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                                            ~ Pam
                                            www.PamBoutilier.com

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