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    • Jason Bowen
      Jason Bowen SVS OG last edited by

      Hey I really like this idea. I think changing the angle of the boat might help you out. Also I added some cool light to bring your character out a bit. Hope you don't mind just an idea. Maybe some reflections will help the boat sit on the water? Hope it helps 🙂

      0_1516873107246_moon crit.jpg

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      • demotlj
        demotlj SVS OG last edited by

        Is the boat moving or standing still? As you have it now, the boat is moving forward but since no one is rowing it, I’m assuming you want it just floating in which case ripples would be all around it. It’s hard to do ripples in dark water but in general the moonlight hits the top of the ripple ridge and the trough of the ripple is slightly darker than the surrounding water. That’s when the moon is in the sky of course so I don’t know what happens when the moon is under water 🙂

        Laurie DeMott
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        • Gary Wilkinson
          Gary Wilkinson last edited by

          Not sure if it will help but the movie, The life of Pi had a great scene with luminescent planken and a jumping whale that might give you some good reference to look into for how a glowing light is with the ripples.

          https://www.google.co.jp/search?q=life+of+pi+glowing&client=firefox-b-ab&dcr=0&source=lnms&tbm=isch&sa=X&ved=0ahUKEwj7u-bigfPYAhXEo5QKHZw9A6cQ_AUICigB&biw=1360&bih=656

          Also I just wanted to mention that I was a little thrown off with the perspective of the moon. Perhaps look at fixing the ellipses as they exit the water. They should be perpendicular to the sea.

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          • rcartwright
            rcartwright last edited by

            Google Christian Riese Lassen Art. His work is a little bit cheesy for my taste but you will find some reference for what you are trying to do.

            https://www.scbwi.org/members/richard-cartwright/
            https://www.instagram.com/richardwcartwright/
            https://www.pinterest.ca/richcartwright3/art-of-richard-cartwright/
            https://www.richardwcartwright.ca/

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            • rcartwright
              rcartwright last edited by

              if you want some videos on painting water go to y-tube and search "mural joe" he does a really good job of teaching you how water and waves work so you understand it more and don't need to use copy reference as much

              https://www.scbwi.org/members/richard-cartwright/
              https://www.instagram.com/richardwcartwright/
              https://www.pinterest.ca/richcartwright3/art-of-richard-cartwright/
              https://www.richardwcartwright.ca/

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              • stringfellowart
                stringfellowart SVS OG @Jason Bowen last edited by

                @jason-bowen Yes, that does look better!

                Bringing whimsical creatures to life.
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                • stringfellowart
                  stringfellowart SVS OG @demotlj last edited by

                  @demotlj I was thinking it was still gently drifting forwards, moving on momentum but sitting still would probably make more sense.

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                  • stringfellowart
                    stringfellowart SVS OG @rcartwright last edited by

                    @rcartwright Thank you! Off to watch some of his videos.

                    Bringing whimsical creatures to life.
                    www.stringfellowart.com
                    www.instagram/stringfellowart

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                    • stringfellowart
                      stringfellowart SVS OG @rcartwright last edited by

                      @rcartwright I see what you mean 😉

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                      • Chip Valecek
                        Chip Valecek SVS Team SVS OG last edited by

                        Aaron Blaise just did a livestream on his youtube channel on water. I'm sure its posted there now you can watch it again.


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