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    • braden H
      braden H last edited by

      This is the first time I've really tried to combine basic shapes and make a thing out of simple composite bits. Critiques and suggestions are most appreciated 🙂

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      • braden H
        braden H last edited by

        Inked the important bit. Once again, critiques are welcome 🙂

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        • juliepeelart
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          Awesome!! I really like it! My only thought would be that the lines outlining the tentacles are very similar, maybe make one side of each or several a little heavier depending on the light.

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          • braden H
            braden H @juliepeelart last edited by

            @juliepeelart

            Thank you! I will absolutely be thickening the lines on the tentacles a tad to add depth. I'm hoping when it's coloured that'll really make them pop.

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            • braden H
              braden H @braden H last edited by

              Any thoughts or suggestions before I finish this off would be most appreciated 🙂

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              • rcartwright
                rcartwright last edited by

                I would add some highlights and shadows

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                • braden H
                  braden H @rcartwright last edited by

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                  Apologies, I should have clarified 🙂 This is just the flats. Shadows and highlights are next.

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                  • Buddy Skelton
                    Buddy Skelton last edited by

                    This is such a fun idea. Good work!

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