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    • Gary Wilkinson
      Gary Wilkinson last edited by

      looking really nice. The foreground elements really help the depth! I know it's only lightly sketched in but watch out with the tangent of that foot and the foreground object.

      www.garywilkinsonart.com
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      • Jason Bowen
        Jason Bowen SVS OG last edited by

        I like number #1 do you need a skull though? It does tend to make a image go to the dark side... just a thought.

        https://www.instagram.com/jasonbowenoils/

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        • Kevin Longueil
          Kevin Longueil SVS OG @evilrobot last edited by

          @evilrobot Really liking this! for me it is #2 that is working best compositionally - could have the second character down from the left and the character at the bottom right be focal points - one of them being secondary - maybe spacing them in a very slightly different way so as to fall nicely on the rule of thirds grid? I'm sure any of these would turn out great though!

          Portfolio: kevinlongueil.com
          https://www.instagram.com/kevinlongueil/

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          • evilrobot
            evilrobot SVS OG last edited by evilrobot

            Another update. Still trying to work out the composition. Nothing set in stone yet. Thinking of having a little gnome riding the boar. And his hands are crap so I'll have to redraw those.Still may change back to the other background. 0_1523951372553_WIP-3.jpg

            http://www.palacioillustration.com/

            https://www.scbwi.org/illustrator-gallery/illustrator-detail/?illustrator_id=84142

            https://www.pinterest.com/evilrobot2/pins/

            https://twitter.com/MyEvilRobot

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            • evilrobot
              evilrobot SVS OG last edited by

              Was able to get a little more done after work today. 0_1524039853825_WIP_4.jpg

              http://www.palacioillustration.com/

              https://www.scbwi.org/illustrator-gallery/illustrator-detail/?illustrator_id=84142

              https://www.pinterest.com/evilrobot2/pins/

              https://twitter.com/MyEvilRobot

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              • Laurie
                Laurie last edited by

                Love how this is turning out! I am missing his flying tresses, though, -- they made it seem like he was being pushed by the wind , which always adds an element of danger on the side of a cliff! This illustration evokes great story elements!

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                • Kevin Longueil
                  Kevin Longueil SVS OG @evilrobot last edited by

                  @evilrobot This composition looks very good to me - especially with the boar facing to the right now - cliff takes us in and down - we hit the group on the road - follow the road to the boar - boar and skull send us to our waning hero - I think this is very solid compositionally and the drawing is looking great!

                  Portfolio: kevinlongueil.com
                  https://www.instagram.com/kevinlongueil/

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                  • evilrobot
                    evilrobot SVS OG last edited by

                    Another work in progress. Went back to the pencil look. Going with a comic book style rendering. 0_1524386258733_WIP-6.jpg

                    http://www.palacioillustration.com/

                    https://www.scbwi.org/illustrator-gallery/illustrator-detail/?illustrator_id=84142

                    https://www.pinterest.com/evilrobot2/pins/

                    https://twitter.com/MyEvilRobot

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                    • evilrobot
                      evilrobot SVS OG last edited by

                      and starting to add some color. 0_1524390173289_WIP-7.jpg

                      http://www.palacioillustration.com/

                      https://www.scbwi.org/illustrator-gallery/illustrator-detail/?illustrator_id=84142

                      https://www.pinterest.com/evilrobot2/pins/

                      https://twitter.com/MyEvilRobot

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                      • lenwen
                        lenwen last edited by

                        looks like an epic journey and adventure! looking forward for more progress! 😃

                        www.lennywen.com
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                        • evilrobot
                          evilrobot SVS OG last edited by evilrobot

                          And a bit further. When I look at it all I see are tons of mistakes and it's not really coming out like I wanted. I really need to work on my hands and figuring out the shapes of those cast shadows. 0_1524418984831_WIP-8.jpg

                          http://www.palacioillustration.com/

                          https://www.scbwi.org/illustrator-gallery/illustrator-detail/?illustrator_id=84142

                          https://www.pinterest.com/evilrobot2/pins/

                          https://twitter.com/MyEvilRobot

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