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    3x3 Challenge - and a triceratops on a tricycle

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    • Jon Anderson
      Jon Anderson SVS OG @smceccarelli last edited by

      @smceccarelli I like 1 (With a tad more light on Mrs. Rex's head to separate her value from the background) C & Z. This is really coming together!

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      • Jason Bowen
        Jason Bowen SVS OG last edited by

        These are great pictures, I like 3, B and Z.

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        • Johanna Kim
          Johanna Kim SVS OG @smceccarelli last edited by

          @smceccarelli Wow, you work FAST. If you're looking for our favorites, my picks are 3, C, X! I kind've like Y as well, but prefer X's coloring of the dino.

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          • smceccarelli
            smceccarelli Pro SVS OG @LauraA last edited by

            @lauraa I'm sort of in love with 1 too - and you're right, my intention was to have the girls as first focal point and Mrs Rex as second read. In 2 it's exactly the opposite It's what Marco Bucci explains in his video on staging, which I really recommend.
            @Johanna-Kim it takes me about 15-30 minutes to do a color thumb and it makes the whole process afterwords enormously easier - it's a good investment of time for me. After that, all major decisions are taken and I can just put on a audiobook or podcast and paint.

            Does anyone like A? I know it's backlit and everything, but for some reason I like the mood....

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            • Jon Anderson
              Jon Anderson SVS OG @smceccarelli last edited by

              @smceccarelli I do like A but to be bashfully honest I imaged being on the other side of the hill and after the thought of things being sunny side up I couldn't bring myself to vote for it.

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              • Eli
                Eli @smceccarelli last edited by

                @smceccarelli I love A. It's my favorite--I do really like the mood of it. For the other two, I like 1 and Z

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                • LauraA
                  LauraA SVS OG @smceccarelli last edited by

                  @smceccarelli I do like A as well. The figures read clearly together in silhouette and I just like the feel of the lighting/time of day. Maybe there's a little less emphasis on the dino face, but you certainly feel his hilariously huge presence on that tiny bike, and you really get the feeling of the joy of the girl. It's kind of "riding off into the sunset" in reverse πŸ™‚

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                  • smceccarelli
                    smceccarelli Pro SVS OG last edited by

                    Finished the first one - I started with the simplest one, to settle the style. Incidentally, these are doubling as style explorations for a book I'm working on (nothing to do with dinosaurs, unfortunately...)

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                    • Nyrryl  Cadiz
                      Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG @smceccarelli last edited by

                      @smceccarelli I love the colors on this piece! Especially the lighting on the dinosaur's face. However, I think it may be too dark on the girl's side of the illustration. I might just be me though. I love what you did. I can't and see the other illustrations.

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                      • smceccarelli
                        smceccarelli Pro SVS OG last edited by

                        At this point I could either spend another 20 hours on this one or leave it as is....what do you think?

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                        • Heather Boyd
                          Heather Boyd @smceccarelli last edited by Heather Boyd

                          @smceccarelli This is FABULOUS! And I love your dinosaurs lols. Last year I worked at a Toy and Games store and I recall a game with dice that would add to your dice collection.! https://www.storycubes.com/

                          After some more intoduction/review work I would definitely be into this challenge!

                          πŸ™‚

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                          Be blessed,

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                          • Miriam
                            Miriam @smceccarelli last edited by Miriam

                            @smceccarelli
                            Sorry to be late to the party, but I love the drawings and the choices you've made so far!

                            (Too late now, but I would have said to keep the dress in the Mrs. Rex Welcome painting, and said no clothes for the other two. Maybe because of the personalities, or the ages of the different dinosaurs, or maybe dinosaurs are like pets in the way that that they can wear a sweater or not and be fine either way--I don't know, but I just liked the originals, and didn't feel that they conflicted. I agree with the other comment about liking the texture of the dino skin. Also, the dress kind of seems to sit on top of the Flower-wishing dino, rather than being part of her. It looks a bit flat next to the details & contours of the skin--especially at the middle & top of the dress--the bottom is working better for me. Maybe too much contrast on the upper part?)

                            Another thing that is standing out to me is the highlight on the back of Mrs. Rex's neck & the sharp shadow line between her neck and face. I don't know anything about lighting, but my eye is being drawn there & I'm left looking at the back of her neck. Also, the color/tone of the neck is very similar to the tree behind it. The rest of the lighting & shadow looks great. I like the dappled shadows, and the Mom's shadow against the truck.

                            I love this whole scene--the exotic blooms, the enthusiasm of Mrs. Rex's expression, her proper lady-like dress & pearls, the positions & posture of the Mom & daughter--extensive story telling!

                            For the triceratops on a trike, I love A! It's my favorite by far. I agree that it has a great mood to it. I'm getting a "one last bit of fun on the way home" kind of vibe, and a comforting feel. They are so happy & carefree. It seems like they've just had the best day together & are good friends (or siblings?--if one is adopted?! ha, ha!)

                            These are all really amazing pieces and so fun to look at! They would make a delightful book!

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                            • smceccarelli
                              smceccarelli Pro SVS OG @Miriam last edited by

                              @miriam Thank you so much for your comments! Not too late at all, as I have not posted any of the finals anywhere. I think what you are seeing in Mrs Rex are mistakes in the perspective of the dress - I will definitely go back and fix them, as well as refine the light on her neck so that it doesΕ„t draw too much attention. Glad you like no 1 on the triceratops, because that is the one I chose in the end πŸ˜‰

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                              • ?
                                A Former User @smceccarelli last edited by A Former User

                                @smceccarelli Hi , your works great. Great composition in this one, I love the way the flowers and the moving van lead the viewer into the scene. For me, I think there may be a color issue, you know first read, second read, that kind of thing. When I relax and just enjoy the image, my eye goes back and forth between the intense purple colors of the Dinosaur's dress and the purple colors (Intensity) of the flowers in the lower right foreground. They both seem to be very important.
                                Theres a tree above, possibly the flowers could be in shade giving more attention to the dinosaur.
                                None of this is "TRUE" of course , just my opinion. Chris

                                PS: I can relate to having dinosaurs next door. There's a fallow field next to our house an a large number of alligator lizards have made it their home. Occasionally they make it into my studio. Caught this little guy in my car the other day...
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                                • Miriam
                                  Miriam @Guest last edited by

                                  @c-davies
                                  Wow! I hope they don't bite!

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                                  • ?
                                    A Former User @Miriam last edited by

                                    @miriam Can you believe it, i live smack dab in the middle of LA and we have Alligator lizards , I don't think they are indigenous, I think someone released them , and yes they will latch on to your finger but they have no teeth. They can be very startling, once I thought I was reaching for an Argyle sock and it took off running across the floor.

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                                    • Eli
                                      Eli @Guest last edited by

                                      @c-davies That is kind of awesome!

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                                      • Johanna Kim
                                        Johanna Kim SVS OG @smceccarelli last edited by

                                        @smceccarelli Magnifique. And just 20 hours? Wow!

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                                        • smceccarelli
                                          smceccarelli Pro SVS OG @Guest last edited by

                                          @c-davies That is awesome! Reminded me when we were in Australia and a gecko came visiting in our room....

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                                          • smceccarelli
                                            smceccarelli Pro SVS OG last edited by

                                            Last one ....in the phase of deciding if it's finished or not.

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