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    • Flordevitaz
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      Day 04

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      • Flordevitaz
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        Day 05

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        • Flordevitaz
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          Day 06

          In this illustration I decided to change the color of the shadows.

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          • Flordevitaz
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            Day 07

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            • Flordevitaz
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              Day 08

              In the background I used an illustration from the Mermay of the last year.

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              • Flordevitaz
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                Day 09

                In this illustration I started to play with the texture of the brushes.

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                • Flordevitaz
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                  Day 10

                  The first doble page of my story.

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                  • Flordevitaz
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                    Day 11

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                    • Flordevitaz
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                      Day 12

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                      • Flordevitaz
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                        Day 13

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                        • Flordevitaz
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                          Day 14 and 15

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                          • Flordevitaz
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                            Day 16

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                              Day 17

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                              • Miriam
                                Miriam @Flordevitaz last edited by

                                @flordevitaz
                                It's hard to tell what is water and what is the eel. At first glance, I thought just the red part was the eel, but then I saw the face in blue & realized that it's a red stripe along a blue body. It might help to change either the water or the body of the eel--you could lighten or darken one, or change the color (maybe add a little green or purple to the blue color).
                                I like how the eel is circled around the mermaid & the horizontal lines on the eel are fun & lively. The little scales flecked over the mermaid's skin is nice detail.

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                                • Flordevitaz
                                  Flordevitaz @Miriam last edited by

                                  @miriam Thank you for your feedback, I really appreciate it.
                                  I had not noticed that, maybe because I always know where is his body. But you are right, the face and the water have similar color and the color of the line doesn´t help too much. Maybe I will change the color of the water, more darken.

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                                  • Flordevitaz
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                                    Day 17 and 18

                                    After some feedback I did some changes to illustration 17. I uploaded it with day 18 that both make a doble page of this little story.

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                                    • Flordevitaz
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                                      Day 19 and 20

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                                        Day 21

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                                        • Flordevitaz
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                                          Day 22

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                                            sheri_p79 @Flordevitaz last edited by

                                            @flordevitaz I love the way you use colour in these, its beautiful, really interesting you don't rely on value but really push the hue and saturation

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