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    Which sharkman is better?

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    • Jason Bowen
      Jason Bowen SVS OG last edited by

      I am currently looking at my character I created for an imaginary big budget movie lol, and I painted it and thought it looked ok but after looking at it again I thought it needed more contrast... which one do you think is the best? first or second. Thanks for any thoughts.

      0_1530815216620_wip shark merman light or dark.jpg

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      • Larry Whitler
        Larry Whitler last edited by

        I prefer the second one. Both are great. I think the brighter contrast along the lighted surfaces creates an enhanced sense of magic or intrigue. Love the style, either way.

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        • Chip Valecek
          Chip Valecek SVS Team SVS OG @Jason Bowen last edited by

          @jason-bowen I prefer the second one. I like the lighting on top of his head.


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          • Heather Boyd
            Heather Boyd last edited by Heather Boyd

            I like a combination of the two. I like the eeriness of the darker tones in the first but definitely more light or glow with the shark man in the second. I think just a bit more light hitting the shark man in the first one, in my opinion.

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            • juliekitzes
              juliekitzes last edited by

              I prefer the second one and would encourage you to pump up the value contrast even more on the body to match the head.

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              • I
                IanS last edited by

                I think (like most other folk) the second is the stronger. The contrast on the face creates a strong focal point.

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                • Jason Bowen
                  Jason Bowen SVS OG last edited by

                  Thanks for everyone's thoughts. I'm going to go with the brighter one with a little tweak. Trying to keep a bit of the eerie scary look of it. 0_1530909482781_wip shark merman final.jpg

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