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    • stringfellowart
      stringfellowart SVS OG last edited by

      I've been looking through some old old drawings, and I'm thinking about revisiting them, as some of the ideas are good, just the execution that needs work.

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      Bringing whimsical creatures to life.
      www.stringfellowart.com
      www.instagram/stringfellowart

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      • Heather Boyd
        Heather Boyd @stringfellowart last edited by

        @stringfellowart I really like the idea to your last image there, the window to a girl's imaginative world of mermaids. Also on your website, under About Me you write "write" twice. Not sure that it is intentional.

        "I am Megan Stringfellow. I do lots of creative things. I write stuff. Paint. Draw. Design. Sew. Write. Make my food talk"

        Instead to clarify, "I am Megan Stringfellow. I do a lot of creative things. I write, I paint, I draw, I design and I sew. I also like to make my food talk."

        Anyways instead of writing "I write stuff." and later ...after Sew. "Write".

        But definitely I think it be great to see these ideas reworked in your present style.

        πŸ™‚ Heather B.

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        Be blessed,

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        • stringfellowart
          stringfellowart SVS OG @Heather Boyd last edited by stringfellowart

          @heather-boyd Good catch! Thanks! I really should just rewrite my about me stuff, but I never know what to say. πŸ˜›

          Bringing whimsical creatures to life.
          www.stringfellowart.com
          www.instagram/stringfellowart

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          • stringfellowart
            stringfellowart SVS OG last edited by

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            More sketches

            Bringing whimsical creatures to life.
            www.stringfellowart.com
            www.instagram/stringfellowart

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            • stringfellowart
              stringfellowart SVS OG last edited by

              Thoughts on color
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              • TessaW
                TessaW last edited by

                These are lovely. In this latest post, I think both a very strong and you could go with your personal fav, but as far as color goes, I like the bottom one with the rain coat. If you end up choosing the top one, I'd try to get more of the color patterning you have in the other one. A bit of that warm purple and greens in the background and a yellow element in the foreground.

                Website: www.tessawrathall.com

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                • Nyrryl  Cadiz
                  Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG @stringfellowart last edited by

                  @stringfellowart i you colors on these last 2 illustrations. I also love your line art! I love the scratchinees and texture of it. If only there’s a way you can preserve them into your final piece, i would really love to see it.

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                  • Pamela Fraley
                    Pamela Fraley SVS OG @stringfellowart last edited by

                    @stringfellowart I love where these are going and the colors are πŸ‘ŒπŸΌ

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                    • Donfito
                      Donfito last edited by

                      -I think in the first one you can explore the different blue colors, to make a beautiful almost monochromatic scene with little color touches.

                      -In the second one you have a clear focal point that is the yellow coat, and you can take advantage of this making a big contrast with the cold background.

                      but at the end both of them look amazing, my fav is #2

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                      • stringfellowart
                        stringfellowart SVS OG last edited by

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                        Okay, here is the final sketch. I don't know about all that details. Apparently I'm a glutton for punishment.

                        Bringing whimsical creatures to life.
                        www.stringfellowart.com
                        www.instagram/stringfellowart

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                        • stringfellowart
                          stringfellowart SVS OG last edited by

                          Progress
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                          Bringing whimsical creatures to life.
                          www.stringfellowart.com
                          www.instagram/stringfellowart

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                          • stringfellowart
                            stringfellowart SVS OG last edited by

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                            Trying to keep this one more painterly.

                            Bringing whimsical creatures to life.
                            www.stringfellowart.com
                            www.instagram/stringfellowart

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                            • stringfellowart
                              stringfellowart SVS OG last edited by

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                              Ugh, I'm at that stage of the painting where I hate it and just want to chuck it. I can't tell if its just because I'm like 80% there. And the reflections are killing me. Or if something is not working.

                              Bringing whimsical creatures to life.
                              www.stringfellowart.com
                              www.instagram/stringfellowart

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                              • braden H
                                braden H @stringfellowart last edited by

                                @stringfellowart

                                "I'm at that stage of the painting where I hate it and just want to chuck it."

                                I feel your pain. I hate that stage so much...

                                What's even worse is that sometimes a painting we initially hate will come out fine and it won't have that stage. But most paintings I feel really good about in the beginning ALWAYS have the "this painting sucks, now..." stage. Ugh...

                                Looks great to me, though!

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                                • TessaW
                                  TessaW last edited by

                                  So beautiful! If I had one suggestion- it's that perhaps the archway area is a little too contrast-y. It frames his head nicely, but the contrast of the dark stone with the green foliage is a bit harsh. My eyes tend to get drawn past his head to the arch and get stuck there.

                                  Website: www.tessawrathall.com

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                                  • stringfellowart
                                    stringfellowart SVS OG @TessaW last edited by

                                    @tessaw good suggestion thanks

                                    Bringing whimsical creatures to life.
                                    www.stringfellowart.com
                                    www.instagram/stringfellowart

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                                    • stringfellowart
                                      stringfellowart SVS OG last edited by

                                      This painting has made me use many dirty words. But I think I've finally worked out the reflections, so just the details are left. And the composition is way lopsided. But I just have to get it done.

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                                      Bringing whimsical creatures to life.
                                      www.stringfellowart.com
                                      www.instagram/stringfellowart

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                                      • Jonas Zavacky
                                        Jonas Zavacky @stringfellowart last edited by Jonas Zavacky

                                        @stringfellowart the reflections looks great! πŸ™‚ Good to see that you follow through! πŸ˜ƒ I am excited to see the final look πŸ™‚

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                                        • Jason Bowen
                                          Jason Bowen SVS OG last edited by

                                          Looks really good. The only thing I would say is the rear hand looks a bit weird on the main character, maybe the thumb needs opening out a bit and the fingers should over hang the cerb like the other hand...

                                          https://www.instagram.com/jasonbowenoils/

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                                          • braden H
                                            braden H last edited by

                                            Looking forward to seeing the final version! Looks great so far.

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