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    • chrisaakins
      chrisaakins @NessIllustration last edited by chrisaakins

      @nessillustration Thanks for the tips and the compliments on the line work. I have been working toward making my lines more expressive and watching the weights and such. I will say it is easier to do digitally than with a real live brush pen. About the hands... I realized that one hand was drawn too small and one of its fingers is probably not capable of bending like that, but I was too far down the road so to speak to change it. I tried enlarging it with paint and it helped some but I know what you mean. Oh well. FInished not perfect right? As far as the face goes, you will have to take that up with God since I was using a photo reference of my wife as the model. (Of course, since she is perfect in every way, I MUST have messed up! hehe.)

      Chris Akins
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        NessIllustration Pro @chrisaakins last edited by

        @chrisaakins LOLLLLLL re your last sentence πŸ˜› Haha smooth!
        I find that sometimes, even when using a photo reference I can still skew the proportions especially if I'm working in a big format... In this case,flipping the picture might help you see discrepancies in the symmetry:

        0_1537457829537_fallportrait-flipped.jpg 0_1537457849951_flippedred.jpg

        I don't know if that helps at all... I'm also a great believer in "finished, not perfect" and think most of the time it's best to take it as a learning experience and move on to the next piece! Reworking the same piece over and over is kind of a creativity killer πŸ™‚

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        Check out my Youtube channel for tips on how to start your career in illustration! www.youtube.com/c/ArtBusinesswithNess

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        • chrisaakins
          chrisaakins last edited by chrisaakins

          @NessIllustration Oh Wow! I see what you mean now that I see it through your eyes. Thanks for the advice. Ha! That one pointer finger that you corrected was the one I tried to fix by enlarging it. I think I made it look like she smashed it. Who knows, maybe she did. I think the face became asymmetrical when my wife expressed her dismay at the double chin I was creating. I think in fixing one problem, I created another. In the work that I did not show, her face was more symmetrical but her chin was way too big. That is the downside of working with traditional. Once you make a giant mistake you have to either embrace it or scrap it. I had already scrapped one start so I decided to go with it. But that thank you so much for the advice about flipping the image. I would not have thought of that. I will try that in the future.

          Chris Akins
          www.chrisakinsart.com
          www.instagram.com/chrisakinsart/

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          • NessIllustration
            NessIllustration Pro @chrisaakins last edited by

            @chrisaakins Hahaha you're funny! Maybe she did smash it πŸ˜› And for the double chin, I can totally imagine how this went down. I had a similar conversation with my fiancΓ© this morning when I asked him to take photos of me "working" for my website I'm currently building. He told me maybe we should wait until tomorrow because I looked tired and puffy - than line of thought did not go well for him πŸ˜›

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            Check out my Youtube channel for tips on how to start your career in illustration! www.youtube.com/c/ArtBusinesswithNess

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              Chip Valecek SVS Team SVS OG @NessIllustration last edited by

              @nessillustration LMAO!!!


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