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    My first digital illustration. Critiques invited!

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      JennyJones @Christine Garner last edited by

      @christine-garner Thank you.

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        robgale @JennyJones last edited by

        @jennyjones Perspective IS really painful! If you're doing it all digitally, one thing that can help is setting up a perspective grid to use as a guide. I like to do my sketching first to get the basic layout and composition, then lay down a grid and tweak things around a bit to fix the perspective.

        Rob Gale
        instagram: www.instagram.com/robgalestudio/
        website: www.robgaleillustration.com

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          JennyJones @robgale last edited by

          @robgale I use Procreate and I know there is an assist option. I just couldn't find it. I need to make use of the tools for sure. Next time...

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            Ok so I took all the advice and added a few things from my own critiques and reworked the illustration. I like it SO much better. Took a while. You will never know how many re-draws of the mom cat and middle cat were done! Whew!!

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              MOO SVS OG last edited by

              So cute! It reminds me of a little golden book we had about The Three Little Kittens 🙂 I don't do digital yet so I can't say anymore 🙂

              Marsha Ottum Owen

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                TessaW last edited by

                Beautiful! I love it. 🙂 The littlest kitty's feet are a nice touch.

                Website: www.tessawrathall.com

                Instagram: www.instagram.com/tessawrathall_art/

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                  Eli @JennyJones last edited by

                  @jennyjones WOW this looks fantastic!!

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                    JennyJones @MOO last edited by

                    @marsha-kay-ottum-owen Thank you. I loved that book when I was little. I will have to go back and look to see if I was unconsciously influenced. One of my current loves are the illustrations of Anita Jeram. She makes the sweetest little animals!

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                      JennyJones @TessaW last edited by

                      @tessaw Thanks! I am learning a lot reworking things. I went back to a couple of spots I did a few weeks ago and touched them up too. I know Jake's words "finished, not perfect" and that I have to let them go and move forward. But these were not finished for too long...

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                        JennyJones @Eli last edited by

                        @eli Thank you. You guys are so encouraging. I am feeling empowered to keep it up.

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