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    • LauraA
      LauraA SVS OG @StudioLooong last edited by

      @studiolooong Something is drawing me to 2 and 4, for what it's worth.

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      • rcartwright
        rcartwright last edited by

        I like 2 the coloring feels like it could have a magical fantasy feel when you apply the lighting to the monster

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        • Heather Boyd
          Heather Boyd @StudioLooong last edited by

          @studiolooong I like numbers 2, 5, 6. 🙂

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          • StudioLooong
            StudioLooong last edited by

            Thanks everyone! I tried to incorporate a little of what I like about the last one into #2 and came up with this color study, @rcartwright I get what you're saying about it having a bit more of a fantasy feel, wondering if this one is working better than the previous ones?

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            Taylor Woolley
            (Formerly Taylor Ackerman / StudioLooong)


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            • StudioLooong
              StudioLooong last edited by

              So this is my first large-scale paint with a background, let me know if you see any areas that I could improve, I think it still needs some cleaning up and I don't know if I got the contrast right.

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              Taylor Woolley
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              • ?
                A Former User last edited by

                This looks great, I really like the lighting coming down into the cave, you've got that spot on. Maybe the character needs some lighting on the top of his neck and tail too?
                Great stuff 😃

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                • StudioLooong
                  StudioLooong @Guest last edited by

                  @hannahmccaffery Yeah thanks, I can definitely add some highlights on top monster!

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                  • Heather Boyd
                    Heather Boyd @StudioLooong last edited by

                    @studiolooong I like the subtle textures (rocks, the fur and the lions pants) and I appreciate the head cut emotionally charged but not gory.

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                    • StudioLooong
                      StudioLooong @Heather Boyd last edited by

                      @heather-boyd thanks so much, I liked the idea of the monster crying over the head but I was afraid that it may be too gross so I worked really hard to play down the gore as much as possible. Glad it isn't coming across as too gross (even though it is a severed head)!

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                      • StudioLooong
                        StudioLooong last edited by

                        Some more slight adjustments:

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