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    WIP Milking Old Cranky Pygmy Goat (Misunderstood Monster)

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    • Johanna Kim
      Johanna Kim SVS OG @Elizabeth Rose last edited by

      @squirrelsize I vote for 5. Cool to see your process from the start. Good luck!

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      • Elizabeth Rose
        Elizabeth Rose last edited by

        Thanks to @juliepeelart @rcartwright @Johanna-Kim for your votes. At least we got it narrowed down.

        @Art-of-B I agree, I think those two have been my favs.Hahahaha! My friends always get a hoot out of the goat butts in my drawings lol. Maybe it should be my trademark.

        @KathrynAdebayo I agree, #2 is very readable. It would be a good challenge for me too, if I do it with that angle. Thanks!

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        • Ailantan
          Ailantan last edited by

          I like 3rd one.

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          • Elizabeth Rose
            Elizabeth Rose last edited by

            Yo Peeps, So I've been thinking about all your suggestions and I've come up with a new one. What do you all think?
            Squirrel gets started by the shadow spills the milk and jumps on her goats face for protection.

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            • juliepeelart
              juliepeelart SVS OG @Elizabeth Rose last edited by juliepeelart

              @squirrelsize I like the concept! It made me chuckle! Is there a way to tweak the composition so there is not a dividing line right down the middle (shadow on one side, goat on the other)? Maybe make the shadow larger and use the rule of thirds?

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              • Elizabeth Rose
                Elizabeth Rose last edited by

                @juliepeelart Yeah! That is a good composition idea! I'll see what I can do on my next sketch. haha! Glad you got some humor from it 🙂

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                • Elizabeth Rose
                  Elizabeth Rose last edited by

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                  • Elizabeth Rose
                    Elizabeth Rose last edited by

                    Color Study
                    Any Thoughts?

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                    • KathrynAdebayo
                      KathrynAdebayo last edited by KathrynAdebayo

                      I think this concept is so funny! Your work is distinct and I eagerly look forward to seeing it when you post to the forum. If I'm not mistaken, I think the shadow of the goat's head would either be falling on the body of the goat (as it appears to be now) or on the wall, but not both. I believe the side of the goat visible to the viewer would be cast in shadow almost completely to achieve that strong shadow on the wall. (But someone please correct me if I'm wrong.) Perhaps that shadow could be contrasted more with the wall/barrels so that it stands out a bit? Thanks for sharing this and being open to critique. I always learn by looking at other people's pieces. I'm really enjoying this one!

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                      • Elizabeth Rose
                        Elizabeth Rose @KathrynAdebayo last edited by

                        @kathrynadebayo Hey! Thanks girl! Thats some good advice. I'll work on it today and see if I can get those shadows in shape. lol

                        I love that you got a kick out of it 🙂

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