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    Barrel Racer. (Watercolor horse) would love feedback or crits!

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    • Miss.Beans
      Miss.Beans last edited by

      Woo! I love the movement in the piece! The background in grey is perfect! I love the piece, and since you asked, the only thing I would be tempted to do is add a bit more contrast. That's my personal opinion though. I would concentrate adding a bit more contrast in the area you want people's attention to go to.

      It is a lovely piece! Watercolours are my fav. 🙂

      Heidi
      https://www.instagram.com/heidilarkman/

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      • Whitney Simms
        Whitney Simms SVS OG @Miss.Beans last edited by

        @miss-beans good call! Not exactly sure where I want the views eye to go. But the entire piece all has equal amount of intensity. Like the faces and the feet hold your same attention.

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        • Whitney Simms
          Whitney Simms SVS OG last edited by

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          bad lighting for the photo...
          here is the final image. Fingers crossed she likes it. Delivering it tomorrow.

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          • Whitney Simms
            Whitney Simms SVS OG last edited by

            Delivery went well. She seemed to like it.

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            • DLArmantrout
              DLArmantrout @Whitney Simms last edited by

              @whitney-simms This watercolor looks beautiful, I like how you made the rider's face stand out more in the final version.

              SVS name: @dlarmantrout
              Instagram: @dlarmantrout

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              • Whitney Simms
                Whitney Simms SVS OG @DLArmantrout last edited by

                @dlarmantrout thank you so much! I had a hard time figuring out the white hat and how to make it pop. And I tend to get really muddy on skin tones and overdo it.

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                • Nyrryl  Cadiz
                  Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG @Whitney Simms last edited by

                  @whitney-simms your watercolor skills are amazing. You really captured the character’s motion in your piece. It looks very dynamic. Great job.

                  Portfolio: nyrrylcadiz.com
                  Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/nyrryl_cadiz/
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                  • Eli
                    Eli @Whitney Simms last edited by

                    @whitney-simms Beautiful, Whitney!!

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                    • Whitney Simms
                      Whitney Simms SVS OG @Nyrryl Cadiz last edited by

                      @nyrrylcadiz wow, thank you!

                      Thanks @Eli !

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                      • Jon Anderson
                        Jon Anderson SVS OG last edited by

                        This is a nice piece! I realize it's found it's new home and hopefully the owner really does enjoy it and you think she did. For future reference (and I have NO idea how to do this in watercolor) as I see the post it seems that it's lacking either some area of saturation around the main focal point or lacking warm colors in the same area. I could be wrong but even the brown tones in the horse feel cool (maybe that was intentional). I can't decide which it is but hopefully that feedback can help on some future piece you work on. I'm a complete rookie in watercolor and I'll be the first to admit I can't match the level of skill you put into this one. Color me impressed!

                        instagram.com/jonandersonillu

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