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    • Elisa Gonzalez O Magaña
      Elisa Gonzalez O Magaña last edited by

      Hello there! This is my first post... up until know was embarrased to show things here but I realised if I don't share and dont get feedback I won´t improve.

      So I started to do some exercises of my weakest points and would like for your critique and feedback for these images.

      1. 0_1542165689958_Figuras3.jpg

      2. 0_1542167354580_Ambientlight.jpg

      3. 0_1542167360814_HighKey.jpg

      Have a Good night and thank you!!

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      • Nyrryl  Cadiz
        Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG @Elisa Gonzalez O Magaña last edited by

        @elisa-gonzalez-o-magaña looking great! Are you taking classes here in SVS?

        Portfolio: nyrrylcadiz.com
        Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/nyrryl_cadiz/
        YouTube: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCbJCF1Im8ZO7hpGWTKOJMuA

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        • Elisa Gonzalez O Magaña
          Elisa Gonzalez O Magaña last edited by

          Thank you, yes well I had a suscription but I had problems with my credit card so it got cancelled. I'm still sorting things out so I can subscribe again

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          • braden H
            braden H last edited by

            Nice work so far 🙂

            When you have your subscription sorted out I'd check out the painting texture and details class. It goes into rendering different shapes and such which it looks like you're doin' here.

            One thing I think you can work on (particularly apparent in expample one) is to make sure that your reflected light is not stronger than your mid tones, and certainly not stronger than your highlight.

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