Society of Visual Storytelling

    SVSLearn Forums

    • Register
    • Login
    • Search
    • Recent
    • Tags
    • Popular
    • Users
    • Groups
    • Search

    Advent

    Artwork
    5
    21
    1549
    Loading More Posts
    • Oldest to Newest
    • Newest to Oldest
    • Most Votes
    Reply
    • Reply as topic
    Log in to reply
    This topic has been deleted. Only users with topic management privileges can see it.
    • chrisaakins
      chrisaakins @chrisaakins last edited by chrisaakins

      Addendum: Critiques/advice wanted: I really love Mary in this picture but I hate how I drew the angel. He kind of looks like the human torch with fairy wings. I just could not capture "powerful glowing being from heaven" with traditional ink and markers. I will take any suggestions as to what I could have done better. I was trying not to go for the traditional sweet look, but I think I failed. Also, I am not sure I got the perspective right on the background but I did take a clue from @Lee-White's creative composition class and I altered the lines so that they are not defined by the paper's edge. I really like the look of the table but I am not sure the angles are good on the pots and bread pan. Any advice?

      about her dress. What is that? Ugh. I REALLY need to draw fabric like every day for a year. Ugh. Oh Well, finished not perfect.

      Also, this is a terrible photograph! I cannot seem to capture a good likeness of this piece. I promise you it looks much better in person Maybe Gabriel is blocking me because I made him look like Surtur from Thor or Darth Maul.

      Chris Akins
      www.chrisakinsart.com
      www.instagram.com/chrisakinsart/

      1 Reply Last reply Reply Quote 0
      • Whitney Simms
        Whitney Simms SVS OG last edited by

        @chrisaakins I think it’s the flames. I know that angels are often discribed as on fire. Something like that. I think it’s because we don’t have words to discribe angelic glowyness. Wouldn’t that be funny in scriptures! Ha! I like the feather like glow. That was pretty. It’s an interesting way to create that feel. Maybe if the “flames” were more curly or just lose them next time. The lighting is nice on Mary.

        1 Reply Last reply Reply Quote 0
        • Whitney Simms
          Whitney Simms SVS OG last edited by

          @chrisaakins can you change Gabrielle’s small triangle flames to hair? Just make a solid type form and use those curls as accent lines. I don’t know how to draw on the picture on my phone. Like, connect the points of the flames to make it look like hair? I bet that would make a big difference. The flames on the wings are really nice.

          1 Reply Last reply Reply Quote 0
          • chrisaakins
            chrisaakins last edited by

            Here is a better picture of it. I was able to scan it finally and adjust it on my laptop. 0_1544007538835_The Annunciation 2MP.jpg

            Chris Akins
            www.chrisakinsart.com
            www.instagram.com/chrisakinsart/

            1 Reply Last reply Reply Quote 0
            • chrisaakins
              chrisaakins last edited by

              Day 5 Joseph's Dream
              0_1544136952883_IMG_20181206_175317_811.jpg

              Chris Akins
              www.chrisakinsart.com
              www.instagram.com/chrisakinsart/

              1 Reply Last reply Reply Quote 2
              • chrisaakins
                chrisaakins last edited by

                Day 6. Census and Tax Luke 2:1-2 I am running behind but that's okay. My daughter had surgery this week.
                0_1544283007566_IMG_20181208_102214_472.jpg

                Chris Akins
                www.chrisakinsart.com
                www.instagram.com/chrisakinsart/

                demotlj 1 Reply Last reply Reply Quote 3
                • demotlj
                  demotlj SVS OG @chrisaakins last edited by

                  @chrisaakins I continue to love the style of these and think it is making a wonderful series. I hope your daughter's surgery was not serious and that she heals quickly.

                  Laurie DeMott
                  instagram.com/demotlj

                  chrisaakins 1 Reply Last reply Reply Quote 1
                  • chrisaakins
                    chrisaakins @demotlj last edited by

                    @demotlj Thank you. This one wasn't, but she has a major one on the 21st.

                    Chris Akins
                    www.chrisakinsart.com
                    www.instagram.com/chrisakinsart/

                    1 Reply Last reply Reply Quote 0
                    • chrisaakins
                      chrisaakins last edited by chrisaakins

                      Here is day 7. The Journey from Nazareth to Bethlehem
                      0_1544889103318_IMG_20181214_233238_143.jpg I realized messed up the coloring of the background. What colors would you have chosen? Maybe do a draw over to let me see? I normally don't struggle with color but I didnt6have a clear vision in my head with this.

                      Chris Akins
                      www.chrisakinsart.com
                      www.instagram.com/chrisakinsart/

                      Jon Anderson 1 Reply Last reply Reply Quote 3
                      • Jon Anderson
                        Jon Anderson SVS OG @chrisaakins last edited by Jon Anderson

                        @chrisaakins said in Advent:

                        Here is day 7. The Journey from Nazareth to Bethlehem
                        0_1544889103318_IMG_20181214_233238_143.jpg

                        What colors would you have chosen?

                        I might have used a darker version of the blue from Mary's robe for the sky then used that color to glaze over the other background colors to start and adjust from there.... but I'm not good at color myself so there's that. My thinking is that by using the same base color and tweaking it ever so slightly it helps unify the colors, especially since this is night scene. I like that you've taken on this project and think you've done well. Keep it up!

                        instagram.com/jonandersonillu

                        1 Reply Last reply Reply Quote 2
                        • chrisaakins
                          chrisaakins last edited by

                          Day 8 A child is born!
                          0_1545078308584_IMG_20181217_150113_815.jpg

                          Chris Akins
                          www.chrisakinsart.com
                          www.instagram.com/chrisakinsart/

                          1 Reply Last reply Reply Quote 1
                          • First post
                            Last post