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    My childhood: a 3-piece series

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    • Nyrryl  Cadiz
      Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG @Miriam last edited by

      @miriam hi! i’m really glad you like it. Thank you so much on the suggestions. I’m kinda hesitant in going back and changing it, seeing that i’m already working on a new piece. But I think I might just do what you said if I have time tonight. 😊 Thank you again!

      Portfolio: nyrrylcadiz.com
      Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/nyrryl_cadiz/
      YouTube: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCbJCF1Im8ZO7hpGWTKOJMuA

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      • ThisKateCreates
        ThisKateCreates last edited by

        It's a beautiful piece! Can't wait to see the rest!

        https://www.instagram.com/thiskatecreates

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        • demotlj
          demotlj SVS OG last edited by

          I especially love the three kids’ different attitudes toward the rain. You’ve captured a lot of unique personality differences just in this simple scene and it makes me want to know the family more.

          Laurie DeMott
          instagram.com/demotlj

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          • Kristin Wauson
            Kristin Wauson last edited by

            This is fantastic! I love how the taller girl is enjoying the rain while the other two are trying to run from it. I get so excited too doing pieces inspired by childhood. And I think everyone thinks their childhood was not interesting because it is familiar to them. Everyone who had a different childhood will see it differently.

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            • Nyrryl  Cadiz
              Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG @Kristin Wauson last edited by

              @kristin-wauson thank you!❤️

              Portfolio: nyrrylcadiz.com
              Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/nyrryl_cadiz/
              YouTube: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCbJCF1Im8ZO7hpGWTKOJMuA

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              • Nyrryl  Cadiz
                Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG last edited by Nyrryl Cadiz

                Hi, everyone! Per request, i found the timt to do the correstions on the piece. Thanks @Miriam! I hope you guys like this new piece

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                Portfolio: nyrrylcadiz.com
                Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/nyrryl_cadiz/
                YouTube: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCbJCF1Im8ZO7hpGWTKOJMuA

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                • Nyrryl  Cadiz
                  Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG last edited by

                  I’m currently working on this one but I’m not feeling it though. I think the colors are too vibrant and I really don’t care for the bacground. I’ll probably redo it all over.

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                  Portfolio: nyrrylcadiz.com
                  Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/nyrryl_cadiz/
                  YouTube: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCbJCF1Im8ZO7hpGWTKOJMuA

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                  • Aaron Pierce
                    Aaron Pierce last edited by

                    I really love it. The colors and designs are so much fun and easily readable. You're definitely doing a great job here.

                    The only thing that stood out was the background, like you mentioned, on the second picture. It just doesn't feel as refined and concrete as the first background. I do like the colors and lighting lower down. It makes it feel like the sun is reflecting off of the wet greenage and water. I like that a lot.

                    Can't wait to see everything finished up and clear. It's looking great.

                    -Aaron

                    Aaron "Aarpie!" Pierce
                    https://apierceinkandlead.com
                    https://www.facebook.com/aaronpierceart/
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                    • NessIllustration
                      NessIllustration Pro last edited by

                      The house seems really big compared to the kids... I'm not sure you really need it there too, even if the kids are only 10-20 meters from the house it would be probable that the nature would hide it, or that it would be out of frame to the right. Love your characters and their expressions! This series is incredibly charming and rings true (probably because it is!)

                      vanessastoilova.com
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                      Check out my Youtube channel for tips on how to start your career in illustration! www.youtube.com/c/ArtBusinesswithNess

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                      • Nyrryl  Cadiz
                        Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG @NessIllustration last edited by Nyrryl Cadiz

                        @nessillustration @Aaron-Pierce i’ll definitely change the house and the background. I just don’t like the over all color. Thanks for the input!

                        Portfolio: nyrrylcadiz.com
                        Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/nyrryl_cadiz/
                        YouTube: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCbJCF1Im8ZO7hpGWTKOJMuA

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                        • Nyrryl  Cadiz
                          Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG last edited by

                          Hi, everybody! I just finished a sketch for another installment. I really wasn’t feeling that previous piece so I decided instead to just move on to a new one. Perhaps, I’ll return to it when I have time in the future. Right now, we have this sketch. My brother and I when, we were younger, used to watch a lot of wrestling tv programs and as expected from any impressionable kid, we tried to copy them. We weren’t really that rough though. The worst injury we both got were cuts on our eyebrows (yes, both of us). Luckily, we had scotch tape when my brother cut his and my mother immediately taped the skin back together. Unfortunately for my turn, we ran out and up to this day I carry that scar on my eyebrow. True story 😅😜Perhaps we can revisit that in the future LOL.

                          Anyway, please let me know if you have any suggestions on this piece guys. It’s still really rough but it’s great to receive input this early. Thank you

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                          Portfolio: nyrrylcadiz.com
                          Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/nyrryl_cadiz/
                          YouTube: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCbJCF1Im8ZO7hpGWTKOJMuA

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