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    • ArtofAleksey
      ArtofAleksey @ThisKateCreates last edited by

      @thiskatecreates you are referring to the more common southern summer gnomes. These are clearly the northern winter gnomes. 😛 I’ve always liked the idea of gnomes being teeny people. Here’s an update: how is it reading so far?
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      • ThisKateCreates
        ThisKateCreates last edited by

        I think that reads better for the theme! More focus on the gnome drinkers

        https://www.instagram.com/thiskatecreates

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        • Coreyartus
          Coreyartus Moderator @ArtofAleksey last edited by

          @swordofodin said in BIG Entry WIP composition:

          @thiskatecreates you are referring to the more common southern summer gnomes. These are clearly the northern winter gnomes. 😛 I’ve always liked the idea of gnomes being teeny people. Here’s an update: how is it reading so far?

          Oh, these are related to the garden gnomes, right? 🙂

          This is a clever, adorable idea! I can't wait to see it with color choices!!

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          • ArtofAleksey
            ArtofAleksey last edited by

            Sketch so far. I’m unhappy with the design of the gnomes. So I’m going back to the drawing board to make them smoother, cleaner, and consistent. Hopefully they’ll look ok. I want to do silly but also want it to look good. I forced the perspective with the background. When I redraw. It on paper it’ll look better.
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            • Kristin Wauson
              Kristin Wauson last edited by

              I really like the way you changed the angle on your original sketch. Can’t wait to see this one finished. It’s looking great so far! Seems like it could be a good candidate for #draw50things if you want to kill two birds.

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              • ArtofAleksey
                ArtofAleksey last edited by

                I’m much happier with this I tried putting in light and values and having some trouble. Also how does one shade glass... I must say research.
                Any thoughts on how to improve the lighting?
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                alekseyillustration.com

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                • ThisKateCreates
                  ThisKateCreates @ArtofAleksey last edited by

                  @swordofodin I like the value structure progress. I would do a life study of a beer stein. Side light it and fill with fave drink. Consume as reward for excellent study!

                  https://www.instagram.com/thiskatecreates

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                  • ArtofAleksey
                    ArtofAleksey @ThisKateCreates last edited by

                    @thiskatecreates kate why you so smart just why. Good idea 🍕 i did not know this site does emojies 🐖

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                    • ThisKateCreates
                      ThisKateCreates @ArtofAleksey last edited by

                      @swordofodin said in BIG Entry WIP composition:

                      Good idea i did not know this site does emojies

                      🍺 🍻 🍺

                      https://www.instagram.com/thiskatecreates

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                      • ArtofAleksey
                        ArtofAleksey @ThisKateCreates last edited by

                        @thiskatecreates 🐱 🐈 ✏ 🥞

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                        alekseyillustration.com

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                        • Nyrryl  Cadiz
                          Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG last edited by

                          Your composition is amazing!

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                          • ArtofAleksey
                            ArtofAleksey @Nyrryl Cadiz last edited by

                            @nyrrylcadiz thank you! 😃

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                            • Aaron Pierce
                              Aaron Pierce last edited by

                              I'm so digging this entry lol The composition and layout is great, and I love the idea. The idea of normal sized being big is a lot of fun 😃

                              Aaron "Aarpie!" Pierce
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                              • theprairiefox
                                theprairiefox last edited by

                                Very fun, and good progress. Can't wait to see more.

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                                • ArtofAleksey
                                  ArtofAleksey last edited by

                                  Ok redrew it on pencil. For space reasons i omitted the wizard and bucktooth gnomes but I think it still looks good.
                                  Next step is inking.
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                                  alekseyillustration.com

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                                  • ThisKateCreates
                                    ThisKateCreates @ArtofAleksey last edited by

                                    @swordofodin This is going great!

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                                    • theprairiefox
                                      theprairiefox @ArtofAleksey last edited by

                                      @swordofodin I like the simplified version you got going on now.

                                      You might want to watch the straw in the gnomes eye. It looks a little funny ending there. Might want to just shorten it up a bit.

                                      And personally I thought the extremely fat gnome from the early picture was a bit more fun, but is your call.

                                      Looking good!

                                      -The Prairie Fox
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                                      • ArtofAleksey
                                        ArtofAleksey @theprairiefox last edited by

                                        @theprairiefox awesome thanks!!

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                                        • Coreyartus
                                          Coreyartus Moderator last edited by

                                          This is looking so great!!! I can't wait to see a values treatment!! Very very cool--thanks for sharing your process with us!!

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                                          • chrisaakins
                                            chrisaakins last edited by

                                            I feel that the straw is creating a tangent with the barrel behind it. Perhaps you could simplify the straw or remove it altogether (Although I like how it reads whimsically) Or maybe put a spout on the tankard!

                                            Chris Akins
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