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    • RobinCampbellArt
      RobinCampbellArt @Jonas Zavacky last edited by

      @Jonas-Zavacky -Seeing your value study is perfect timing for me... I will be doing color studies fo a few images this week for a workshop assignment. It will be my first time doing them, but I can see by how you’ve layed down values it will be helpful for picking the right tones in the high interest areas. Very nice:-)

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      • Jonas Zavacky
        Jonas Zavacky @RobinCampbellArt last edited by

        @RobinCampbellArt glad you like it and that it was helpfull to you!! Good luck woth the studies! 😃

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        • Jonas Zavacky
          Jonas Zavacky last edited by

          Worked on the comp a bit more... Made the character smaller to sell the idea that he is tiny person heading somewhere unknown. also made the background forest more interesting, but in such a way that it is helping to sell the focal area (at least I am trying to :smiling_face_with_open_mouth_closed_eyes: )
          value sketch.jpg

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          • krisblack
            krisblack @Jonas Zavacky last edited by

            @Jonas-Zavacky I really like this color study. The cooler greens push into the background while the warmer greens pop.

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            • AnnaDaviscourt
              AnnaDaviscourt @Jonas Zavacky last edited by

              @Jonas-Zavacky I'm really digging this layout. My eye goes to the white shape against the black opening and the black figure is a close second read. I love how you handled the clumps of foliage in your color rough- the patterning of your lines made it feel detailed while keeping it loose. I can't wait to see how this develops!

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              • Jonas Zavacky
                Jonas Zavacky @AnnaDaviscourt last edited by Jonas Zavacky

                @AnnaDaviscourt Nice to hear you like it! Thanks! I was originally planning to paint it whole, but I wanna use linework now, bcs I enjoy it far more. So I am curious how it develops too :Dw

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                • Jonas Zavacky
                  Jonas Zavacky last edited by

                  Some update on the illustration. Made linework and colors with basic rendering which I probably change, bcs it is kinda messy :smiling_face_with_open_mouth_cold_sweat: and wanna move to character soon.

                  But anything that bugs you on this? Thaanks 🙂
                  linework.jpg

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                  • Jonas Zavacky
                    Jonas Zavacky last edited by Jonas Zavacky

                    Hey there 🙂 managed to work on it more and this is what I have so far. :).
                    I consider it almost finish, but what are your thoughts? and Thanks so much for every feedback I got so far!!! ^^
                    forest boy.jpg

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                    • Jonas Zavacky
                      Jonas Zavacky last edited by Jonas Zavacky

                      alright, so this is the final picture I guess 🙂 It took me more time then I expected, but I had real fun doing it (at least when I switched to linework 😃 )

                      Thanks for every feedback you gave me ❤

                      illustration_misty_journey.jpg

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                      • Heather Boyd
                        Heather Boyd @Jonas Zavacky last edited by

                        @Jonas-Zavacky I like these original colours - they are very moody.

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                        • Jonas Zavacky
                          Jonas Zavacky @Heather Boyd last edited by

                          @Heather-Boyd Thanks, Heather! Do you mean the ones on the version without the boy? I like them too but for some reason, I found them dirty 😃

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                          • Heather Boyd
                            Heather Boyd @Jonas Zavacky last edited by

                            @Jonas-Zavacky Yes the one without the boy -I understand your point though. I tend to enjoy darker tones -this one felt more like a dewy rainy day and I love your mist/fog.

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                            • ArtofAleksey
                              ArtofAleksey last edited by

                              These are so good. I struggle with composition and im just loving this

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                              • Jonas Zavacky
                                Jonas Zavacky @ArtofAleksey last edited by

                                @Aleksey thank you Aleksey ! 😃 Yeah composition is still pretty hard for me as well..

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                                • Annemieke
                                  Annemieke SVS OG @Jonas Zavacky last edited by

                                  @Jonas-Zavacky This is beautiful! I am by no means an expert on composition, but the only thing that jumped out at me is that the light (grey) background on the left looks a bit like smoke coming out of the jewel the little boy is holding. I think you can fix this easily by getting rid of the first little "bump' between his shoulder and his hand. Or extending it a bit more to the right of his hand.
                                  I hope this makes sense...

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                                  • Jonas Zavacky
                                    Jonas Zavacky @Annemieke last edited by

                                    @Annemieke Oh yeah that is right! 😃 Didn`t notice it at all.. Thanks ! !

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