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    WIM Book Cover "The Wind in the Willows"

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    • Elizabeth Rose
      Elizabeth Rose @andersoncarman last edited by

      @andersoncarman Haha! You know, I totally agree with it looking over crowded. I have been thinking about the idea of taking things out. I think that would be a good direction to go for. I also agree about it not looking cohesive. I think taking out some of the characters and elements will help. I'll mess around with that and see how it looks. Thanks for the input man! Someone with fresh eyes can really make nagging thoughts real. lol

      What are your thoughts on the gradients?

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      • Elizabeth Rose
        Elizabeth Rose last edited by Elizabeth Rose

        Yep! I like it Better
        I think I need to do something about that texture on the tree now. I reckon either add more texture to the rest of the scape or take it out all together.

        Screen Shot 2019-03-14 at 11.06.37 AM.png

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        • Elizabeth Rose
          Elizabeth Rose last edited by

          Textures Galore!
          I added a wee bit of orange in the sunrise. Should I leave it? Yea or nay?

          I'm still working on the gradients and I need to tweak the mansion and surrounding trees.
          Anything else that pops out to you all that I should change or move around?

          Screen Shot 2019-03-15 at 7.33.56 AM.png

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          • Jonas Zavacky
            Jonas Zavacky @Elizabeth Rose last edited by

            @Squirrelsize hey that looks really good already ! excited to see the final - and I am for the orange light πŸ™‚

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            • MichaelaH
              MichaelaH last edited by

              I like the texture and the color change, makes it warmer.

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              • avfarrar
                avfarrar last edited by avfarrar

                I also can't wait to see the final! Always really impressed with your art style @Squirrelsize . Great job!

                There is beauty in life!

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                • Pamela Fraley
                  Pamela Fraley SVS OG @Elizabeth Rose last edited by

                  @Squirrelsize I love this! I love the texture and the trees and I like the orange you added too. It makes the characters pop I think since it’s refleced in the water as well.

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                  • demotlj
                    demotlj SVS OG last edited by

                    I'm late to the party but I vote for orange too. Really nice cover.

                    Laurie DeMott
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                    • Elizabeth Rose
                      Elizabeth Rose last edited by

                      I'm having more fun with textures and effects. I tweaked around with the title typography. I'm liking how the title looks, but I'm thinking I might try a few different fonts for the author's name at the bottom of the cover. Not sure if I like it or not. What do you all think? Maybe something that will compliment the font title a bit more. Do you all have any good fonts that could work?

                      You all liked the orange so much I added a bit more!

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                      • MichaelaH
                        MichaelaH last edited by

                        It is much better, more orange is also good idea. Like the texture on the sea and the background. I do like more the sharp edge of the cover, like the version before, not the texture edge of the cover as now.

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                        • Elizabeth Rose
                          Elizabeth Rose last edited by

                          Here is another one with a few different effects. I also did the hard edge too πŸ™‚

                          How do you all feel about the new Author's name font?

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                          • Elizabeth Rose
                            Elizabeth Rose last edited by

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                            • Elizabeth Rose
                              Elizabeth Rose last edited by

                              Here are the last three for comparison:

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                              • Chip Valecek
                                Chip Valecek SVS Team SVS OG @Elizabeth Rose last edited by

                                @Squirrelsize this really came together great. I prefer the middle on but with a hard edge. As far as the author font, I tend to like something very basic and in the sans serif family. But that is just my opinion on that.


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                                • MichaelaH
                                  MichaelaH last edited by

                                  I also prefer the middle one and with hard edge.

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                                  • Heather Boyd
                                    Heather Boyd @Elizabeth Rose last edited by

                                    @Squirrelsize I like the first two. The last one I find too light ad the characters in the boat to sharp a contrast -I feel it gets lost/messy. πŸ™‚ Which now looking at the second one I find the character and boat area similar to my issue with the third one but like it better.

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                                    • Elizabeth Rose
                                      Elizabeth Rose last edited by

                                      Wow! Thanks you all! Some really good tips and suggestions πŸ™‚

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                                      • Elizabeth Rose
                                        Elizabeth Rose last edited by

                                        Left is the old dark one. Right is the new with straight edges.

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                                        • andersoncarman
                                          andersoncarman last edited by

                                          @Squirrelsize I like straight edges

                                          Nice work! this is looking great!

                                          Cheers,
                                          Anderson Carman

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                                          • Jon Anderson
                                            Jon Anderson SVS OG @Elizabeth Rose last edited by

                                            @Squirrelsize The straight edges look nicer to me as the jagged edge is a bit distracting. Good work!

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