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    • jasondmcintosh
      jasondmcintosh @Justin Moss last edited by

      @Justin-Moss Thanks for taking the time to review this and give your insight! What you said makes total sense!

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      • braden H
        braden H @jasondmcintosh last edited by

        @jasondmcintosh Neat creature! Combining a bunch of animals seems like a great exercise 🙂

        There are a few good videos on svslearn that have to do with character design (monsters, animals, people, characters, etc) that'll give you some new tools to work with when it comes to using basic shapes when creating characters and the reasons to use them.

        I'm curious, is the racoonaburaff (bunnagirrcoon? racagirbun?) meant to be friendly? Scary? Huggable? Dangerous? How is the audience meant to feel about this creature?

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        • jasondmcintosh
          jasondmcintosh @braden H last edited by

          @Braden-Hallett thanks! This is the “Raffoon”. My daughter came up with the idea, and I thought it was funny. But y’know, you brought up a good point...I never once thought of how the audience should feel about this creature. Duh. I really respect you as an artist...what sort of design/illustration/color flaws do you see, or what would you change?

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          • ArtofAleksey
            ArtofAleksey last edited by

            Have you heard of Terry Whitlatch? She is a creature designer she did a really cool podcast i think everyone would benefit from listening to.
            It was on the Academy of Art Illustration podcast. She talks alot about what to think about when designing a creature. I really how you designed this and I think you would love thay podcast. It has a video component too.

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            • braden H
              braden H @jasondmcintosh last edited by

              @jasondmcintosh It depends on how you want the creature to come across, I suppose. Right now I get a kind of predatory vibe (I think it's from some of the sharper angles and those pointy girraffe toes). If you wanted it come across as friendlier, I'd soften in up (round out the toes and muzzle maybe?) maybe dial up the fuzziness factor?

              I really like the colours 🙂

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              • jasondmcintosh
                jasondmcintosh @braden H last edited by

                @Braden-Hallett Thanks, Braden! That's good advice!

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                • jasondmcintosh
                  jasondmcintosh @ArtofAleksey last edited by

                  @Aleksey I appreciate the suggestion. Terry Whitlatch is one of my favorite illustrators of all time. I'm going to look up that podcast this morning and listen as a I draw. Thanks for taking the time to reply!

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                  • Chip Valecek
                    Chip Valecek SVS Team SVS OG last edited by

                    Thats a really cool creature! One of my all time favorite artists Aaron Blaise did something similar with a few paintings.


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                    • Johanna Kim
                      Johanna Kim SVS OG last edited by

                      Neat idea creating a hybrid creature! I'm curious...do you have a back story or personality for this creature? How do you want it to come across to us? Right now, it looks sad, timid (droopy ears), a bit weary (the dark eyes), and unsure of the butterfly.

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                      • jasondmcintosh
                        jasondmcintosh @Johanna Kim last edited by

                        @Johanna-Kim Thanks for the input! You totally are right on. I created this creature without any backstory or intent. I just glued it together and you're totally spot on...by doing that, it loses a lot of personality and punch. I need to THINK when i draw. Great feedback, thanks!

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