APRIL PROMPT "THE MOMENT BEFORE"

Hi everyone! For April's contest results I decided to do something a little different. I decided to do a video critique of all 58 entries! Whew! Not easy and I'm losing my voice from it, but it was so great to see all the wonderful work that you guys did!

The crit video is FREE for anyone to view and can be seen here:

https://courses.svslearn.com/courses/april-contest-critiques

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Hope you guys like the crits as much as I liked seeing all your work. I ask a lot of questions in the crits and ask students to try different things. I'd love to hear what you think of any of the suggestions I had. : )

Cheers,
Lee

Eli

WOW!! I thought you were kidding at first, @Lee-White ! That is amazing! Thank you.

Amber Lynn Benton

@Lee-White The videos crits are awesome - thanks for pouring that much time and energy in! In image ten it is a bit hard to read but is the monster holding cymbals and getting ready to wake up the little boy?

Lee White

@Amber-Lynn-Benton Ahhh, that makes so much more sense now!!!

Amber Lynn Benton

@Lee-White I bet you feel like you just ran a visual marathon!

MF James

@Amber-Lynn-Benton . Yes! That is my image. I thought the cymbals were obvious, but now I can see they were not. They definitely need more detail but since I wanted to keep the room dark, I lost a lot of information.
Something to think about in the future.

gemma driessen

@Lee-White Thank you for the feedback! I am glad you liked my image :smiling_face_with_open_mouth_smiling_eyes:

burvantill

@burvantill After listening to the AWESOME SAUCE critique yesterday I have applied most of @Lee-White 's recommendations. I have removed/lightened the pencil lines in the mountains, increased contrast throughout and changed the colors of the boys clothes in the back. The reason they were all the same is because they are boy scouts in their type B uniform, but the masses don't know about that so, since this is not a BSA illustration it is wise to have their outfits be dissimilar. I did not move the "boy on the hat" because I would have had to repaint it, but I will keep that type of juxtaposition in mind moving forward.

Before & After
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Amber Lynn Benton

@burvantill Great changes! I got the scout references since I wash about a dozen class B shirts every week, lol!

burvantill

@Amber-Lynn-Benton
Right! We are out of scouts now, but ah the memories!