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Catching Snow Watercolor

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  • Rob Smith
    Rob Smith last edited by 11 Nov 2015, 02:50

    With the failure of my characters catching snow on their tongues in the last painting I thought why not zoom in. I started with a rough sketch on a post-it note. Painting done on 140lb Cold Press Arches using ink pen, watercolors (M. Graham), and a little gouache.

    I'm trying to build up a body of work highlighting winter and my fond memories of snow and childhood. I don't like winter near as much now : ). Thanks for your time.

    snow_Catchersketch.jpg

    Catching_Snow.jpg

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    • Charlie Eve Ryan
      Charlie Eve Ryan Pro SVS OG last edited by Charlie Eve Ryan 11 Nov 2015, 04:04 11 Nov 2015, 03:52

      This is really fun and charming, Rob.

      I hope you don't mind I did a small draw over. Just a few things... I lowered her facial features a bit, I felt we were losing too much forehead even with her head tilted back. It's a tricky angle and I don't have a reference. I also took out the cheek lines and tried to use the paint to express the roundness there instead of relying on ink. The three lines in a row was a bit distracting and confusing to the eye. I also downplayed the smile a bit, though that could be a style thing and it is fun and dramatic so you can do leave it as is if you want. I tried to define her neck a bit more by adjusting her collar a tad. Hope that helps and feel free to disregard. 😃

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      • Rob Smith
        Rob Smith last edited by Rob Smith 11 Nov 2015, 06:08 11 Nov 2015, 06:08

        @Charlie-Eve-Ryan Thanks for your input. Your ideas made me rework the image. Here is the newly revised painting.

        Catching_Snow2.jpg

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        • bharris
          bharris last edited by 11 Nov 2015, 15:55

          The revision is wonderful, she looked a little demented before ;). I like the color pallet you've used, but I almost wish that you did your amazing colored snow as a background. Maybe on another piece as you go into your series!

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          • Leontine
            Leontine last edited by Leontine 11 Nov 2015, 16:08 11 Nov 2015, 16:01

            Its FUN! Now I challenge you to make one in mostly blue, but use one complementary Colour. it will help to get a more winterly feeling like this....example.jpg Love winter, snow and Christmas!

            Leontine
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            • Rob Smith
              Rob Smith last edited by 11 Nov 2015, 19:49

              @Leontine I will accept your challenge

              @bharris You made me chuckle...yep she did look a little demented.

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              • Charlie Eve Ryan
                Charlie Eve Ryan Pro SVS OG last edited by 11 Nov 2015, 19:54

                Great job, Rob...really nice work. I love the challenge too, go for it!!

                Happy Creating
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                • Leontine
                  Leontine @Rob Smith last edited by 12 Nov 2015, 07:28

                  @Rob-Smith I will accept your challenge as well. What is it?

                  Leontine
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                  • Rob Smith
                    Rob Smith last edited by 17 Nov 2015, 00:32

                    I went back and did a completely new sketch and then a new painting for "Catching Snow". The final image is a combination of traditional and digital watercolor. More traditional then digital.

                    Eyes open or closed?

                    catching_snow_revsm.jpg
                    catching_snow_rev2.jpg

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                    • Naroth Kean
                      Naroth Kean last edited by 17 Nov 2015, 00:56

                      I love the color so much and the character as well. I prefer eyes close but if you want them open I think you might want a little white dot or sparkling in her eyes.

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                      • Dan Tavis
                        Dan Tavis last edited by Dan Tavis 17 Nov 2015, 01:26 17 Nov 2015, 01:26

                        I prefer the eyes closed, because she has her eyes open then seems to be paying more attention to the viewer rather than enjoying the moment in the snow. Awesome job!

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                        • joanie stone
                          joanie stone last edited by 17 Nov 2015, 01:37

                          I too prefer the eyes closed and I really like the colors in these. One minor thing that I noticed was her chin seems a little long, you might want to lower her facial features a tad to make her look more child-like.

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                          • Rob Smith
                            Rob Smith last edited by 17 Nov 2015, 02:42

                            @joanie-stone Thanks for your suggestions. That seems to be a trend with me. Here is a the revised image with the facial features set a little lower on the head.

                            catching_snow_rev3.jpg

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                            • Dan Tavis
                              Dan Tavis last edited by 17 Nov 2015, 02:46

                              Nice! Beautiful colors by the way. I use M.Graham watercolors as well 😃 awesome paints

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                              • Leontine
                                Leontine @Rob Smith last edited by 17 Nov 2015, 08:00

                                @Rob-Smith Oh wow Rob, its really working out! warm, fun and fresh! The snowflakes are awesome! I want to learn to work with watercolor tooo! I am working on mine btw...maybe I finish up tonight 😃

                                Leontine
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                                • Rich Green
                                  Rich Green SVS OG @Rob Smith last edited by 17 Nov 2015, 15:43

                                  @Rob-Smith I always really enjoy your colors - it adds so much fun, interest and joy to your artwork!

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                                  • Rob Smith
                                    Rob Smith last edited by 1 Dec 2015, 16:03

                                    I recently went back and re-visited the original painting/idea. I made some changes digitally to the image and renamed it "Its Snowing".

                                    Its_Snowing.jpg

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                                    • Bobby Aquitania
                                      Bobby Aquitania last edited by 1 Dec 2015, 16:30

                                      Great pieces all, on the this last one, maybe change the sunflower to something more Xmas-sie? A star, reindeer, or candy cane? The green contrast makes me think this is the first snow, maybe a light blue glaze on top would show the weather transition more?

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                                      • Rob Smith
                                        Rob Smith last edited by 1 Dec 2015, 20:43

                                        @Bobby-Aquitania Thanks for the suggestion!

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