Society of Visual Storytelling

    SVSLearn Forums

    • Register
    • Login
    • Search
    • Recent
    • Tags
    • Popular
    • Users
    • Groups
    • Search

    The Moment Before My Mom Left WIP

    Artwork
    20
    60
    4792
    Loading More Posts
    • Oldest to Newest
    • Newest to Oldest
    • Most Votes
    Reply
    • Reply as topic
    Log in to reply
    This topic has been deleted. Only users with topic management privileges can see it.
    • Elizabeth Rose
      Elizabeth Rose last edited by

      I'm parked and settled into my campsite now! Yey! hopefully I can steal a few hours this week at the campground to get this finished up. I really hope I wont have to rush it.

      I've been adding a few background items to see how it looks, I'm planning to tone a lot of the background stuff down in the final. These items, like the pill bottles on the table, the hat on the wall are real things that were in my moms room. my only concern is that they may take away from the main vocal point, but then they might just by happy eye-candy to bound around the scene with. What do you all think?

      Untitled_Artwork 33.jpg

      https://elizabethrosehoffman.com/
      https://www.instagram.com/elizabethrosehoffmanart/
      https://linktr.ee/elizabethrosehoffman

      Heather Bouteneff 1 Reply Last reply Reply Quote 6
      • Heather Bouteneff
        Heather Bouteneff @Elizabeth Rose last edited by

        @Squirrelsize i think it's perfect. I love the curtain and pants

        https://heatherbouteneff.com

        Elizabeth Rose 1 Reply Last reply Reply Quote 1
        • Elizabeth Rose
          Elizabeth Rose @Heather Bouteneff last edited by

          Thanks @Heather-Bouteneff

          https://elizabethrosehoffman.com/
          https://www.instagram.com/elizabethrosehoffmanart/
          https://linktr.ee/elizabethrosehoffman

          1 Reply Last reply Reply Quote 0
          • S
            suenaumi last edited by

            I think the extras add to the story and don't detract from the focal point, especially if you tone those down and have a higher contrast around the focal area. Also, I never responded earlier, but I do like the added hand on your shoulder!

            Elizabeth Rose 1 Reply Last reply Reply Quote 1
            • Whitney Simms
              Whitney Simms SVS OG last edited by

              It’s really turning out so sweet and beautiful. I like all the extras!

              Elizabeth Rose 1 Reply Last reply Reply Quote 1
              • Elizabeth Rose
                Elizabeth Rose @suenaumi last edited by

                @suenaumi Love the impute! And good idea about the higher contrast around the focal area. I'll keep that in mind for sure. Yeah, the hand on the shoulder is growing on me. I think its a keeper πŸ™‚

                https://elizabethrosehoffman.com/
                https://www.instagram.com/elizabethrosehoffmanart/
                https://linktr.ee/elizabethrosehoffman

                1 Reply Last reply Reply Quote 0
                • Elizabeth Rose
                  Elizabeth Rose @Whitney Simms last edited by

                  @Whitney-Simms Thanks girl! πŸ™‚

                  https://elizabethrosehoffman.com/
                  https://www.instagram.com/elizabethrosehoffmanart/
                  https://linktr.ee/elizabethrosehoffman

                  1 Reply Last reply Reply Quote 0
                  • Elizabeth Rose
                    Elizabeth Rose last edited by

                    Okay! this is what I have for the line work (might still do a few last minute touch ups). Next I'm going to try to work on the coloring. I might be staying up kinda late tonight and drink a pot of coffee!

                    anyhow, Thanks to everyone who has helped me so far! I can't tell you all how wonderful it has been to learn from all your advice. You all are great!

                    It has been so incredible to hear the stores you all have shared of loosing loved ones. I really have felt some kindred spirits here. Thanks again you all!

                    And as always, any tips are welcome πŸ™‚ All the elements are still moveable in Procreate.

                    Untitled_Artwork 34.jpg

                    https://elizabethrosehoffman.com/
                    https://www.instagram.com/elizabethrosehoffmanart/
                    https://linktr.ee/elizabethrosehoffman

                    S Erin.Cortese 2 Replies Last reply Reply Quote 6
                    • S
                      suenaumi @Elizabeth Rose last edited by

                      @Squirrelsize i love it. I also like the way you have a few things extending beyond the picture plane. Thats a cool idea.

                      1 Reply Last reply Reply Quote 2
                      • Erin.Cortese
                        Erin.Cortese Moderator @Elizabeth Rose last edited by Erin.Cortese

                        @Squirrelsize This is beautiful. I agree with @suenaumi, the pieces extending outside the border are a really nice touch.

                        1 Reply Last reply Reply Quote 1
                        • Referenced by  Elizabeth Rose Elizabeth Rose 
                        • Referenced by  Elizabeth Rose Elizabeth Rose 
                        • First post
                          Last post