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    Group run through creative environment design week 3 art and feedback

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    • braden H
      braden H @Heather Boyd last edited by

      @Heather-Boyd You picked a hard design to copy! That kind of roof is something I'd have a really hard time with. I don't have time at the moment to do a draw over (maybe in the next few days?).

      I don't think your character is too big for the rooms. However, the windows on the main floor are placed in such a way that they're well above head height if on the main floor, or foot level if they're on the second floor.

      I think your roof is close. Very VERY close 🙂 My one fix would involve finding the centre line of the left roof to realign it. I'll show you when I do a draw over 🙂

      Nice work! Like I said. Really challenging roof!

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      • Coley
        Coley @braden H last edited by

        @Braden-Hallett ahhhhhhhh..........yes I see what you mean on the top of the silo..........I did do how to draw everything but sometimes I have to keep repeating the exercises to really get things to sink in.........!
        I was motivated to get back to understanding perspective more after these last few exercises so I totally burned my way through mastering perspective this week! All the video and exercises tho I just can't seem to make a good car no matter how hard I try lol. I will keep trying. The principles sank in a little more and the figure drawing exercise really helped for sure. I am learning so much.
        the couch was slightly skewed, not totally symmetrical, I like how you emphasized the cruve on the back tho, it was great to look at thumbnails and rule of thirds. It just helps the puzzle pieces stick together in my brain to revisit these things! I know you had a busy week so thank you for taking some time to critique!

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        • Heather Boyd
          Heather Boyd @braden H last edited by Heather Boyd

          @Braden-Hallett

          Yes don't worry, when you have time.

          I figure if I am sitting down and drawing I push myself to work on something even harder than I planned to. I am not too sure how to set up roofs aligning them in proper perspective. I did use some other roof references to help me. I just wish there were steps I could work within or rules to draw them, without being so flustered.

          I will edit the windows thanks.

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          • Heather Boyd
            Heather Boyd last edited by

            I strayed a bit for my last "village hut" I did "s'" . Anyways I had fun.😀

            CEDC Workbook 02-1 THIS ONE mushroom sandplant mars.jpg

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            • braden H
              braden H @Heather Boyd last edited by

              @Heather-Boyd Just a bit 😉

              Looks nifty, though! And really, fun is the point of the exercise 🙂

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              • Heather Boyd
                Heather Boyd last edited by

                I had to set a time limit or I feared I would neither start or finish the couch. 48 minutes set and finished 2 minutes early. I also squeezed in a bit of colour and value. 😃

                CEDC Workbook 02-2 Couch 01.jpg

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                • braden H
                  braden H @Heather Boyd last edited by

                  @Heather-Boyd setting a timer's a good idea 🙂 I tend to spend WAY too much time on these studies (partly because everyone's turning in such awesome work 😃 )

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                  • Heather Boyd
                    Heather Boyd @braden H last edited by

                    @Braden-Hallett

                    That's the excuse we tell ourselves. haha but thanks

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                    • Susan Marks
                      Susan Marks @Heather Boyd last edited by

                      @Heather-Boyd I agree that time-blocking can help me unblock and get something down and from there I've got a start. I love the purple couch!

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                      • Heather Boyd
                        Heather Boyd last edited by

                        45 Minutes again. Week 4 tomorrow 🙂

                        CEDC Workbook 02-3 windmill inspired.jpg

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