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    Commissions make me nervous. Any helpful tips on the painting are appreciated!

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    • Whitney Simms
      Whitney Simms SVS OG last edited by

      I added more paint. Now I’m seriously done with their commissions. Yuck! But if I want them to sell my cards in their store, I should probably paint a few things that force me out of my comfort zone. And they know licensing people and stuff.

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      • Johanna Kim
        Johanna Kim SVS OG @Whitney Simms last edited by

        @Whitney-Simms I think this watercolor looks gorgeous. Maybe to help differentiate from the mid-values, you could deepen some of the shadows with a thin wash of purple, esp. under the awning? I did a rough drawover showing what I mean, plus added a piece by Iraville for inspiration.
        drawover_svs.jpg

        http://www.johannakim.com
        http://instagram.com/johannahkim/

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        • Whitney Simms
          Whitney Simms SVS OG last edited by

          @Johanna-Kim youre the best! Thanks for the tips. I did go and deepen the greens and grays already. I went to scan and said , ugh. One more try. But the shadow from the awning is fantastic! I’ll totally add that in. It adds tons to the painting

          I totally love that artist you posted. I follow her and love her work already.

          Thanks for the tips and feedback!

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          • Whitney Simms
            Whitney Simms SVS OG last edited by

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            Here are the final images! And shots from the mother’s day event. It was tons of fun. I’ve alreayd gotten a bunch of new followers. A commission I politely said no to, approached by another store to possibly carry my cards and took my card to pass it along to an entirely different store, interviewed and post on a town blog. So much fun! Next I need to come ready with a few big ticket items as well. But for a week prep, I think I did pretty good!

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              suenaumi last edited by

              Wow. This is impressive. Way to go!

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